Song Of An Innocent

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sanjay Mazumder, Feb 18, 2005.

  1. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    This song is dedicated to all the Slum Children worldwide.
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    Song of an innocent
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    I am a baby in a dustbin
    So look about
    And pull me out
    I wanna see the blue sky
    I wanna hear the rivers
    I wanna feel the heat of the sun
    So don’t let me die
    I am also a human
    And wanna show my existence
    Can’t you touch my heart
    And hear the song
    Love is there in every beat
    And in every breath
    But I’m so near to death
    So save me, save me
    Free me, free me
    I am born free
    Let me be the future
    Save me from the torture
    And see how I change the world………..
     
  2. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Nobody liked the song ???? :eek::
     
  3. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    well written, good job. great premise


    regards,
    saurabh
     
  4. rev

    rev New Member

    That was really pretty. You really became their voice through this. Touchy.
    ( oh, and BTW An idea never ages.)
     
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks saurabh and rev.

    We all should try to contribute a little bit for them. We all can make the world look more beautiful.
     
  6. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    good job.....
     
  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks Subhro.
     
  8. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Harsh facts...

    We should unite together for such causes!
    Otherwise this world would be no longer a beautiful place!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  9. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Wow...amazing lyrics...all I've got to say about,I think they're brilliant :)
     
  10. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    nice one dude...
     
  11. rev

    rev New Member

    You know, we can do something. It doesn't need to be big. Just look around you and see these kids and help in any small way. Smile at them, pick up something that they dropped etc. At least they won't grow up with feelings of indignition.
    (If this works, be proud of it sanjay!)
     
  12. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks Zoom, Nirvanafreak and DP.

    Well said rev. Atleast we all can implement ur idea. And I know that surely would make a difference.
     
  13. rizz

    rizz *Always 420*

    i can feel(..!!??)....gr8 wrten.....amzing....and u change ur avature hah??? g. bush???
     
  14. jayswami

    jayswami Blue J

    wow sanjay is no longer psycho. he is writing soft mellow poetry with a prupose. he also changed his avataar.he had this serial rapist avataar before.. and wrote poetry like i will cut u in pieces and ziplock you in my fridge etc...

    nice change dude , good job :)
     
  15. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    @jay, lol...... :) U really made me laugh. Well, thanks a lot for liking the lyrics. Life goes on changing, Jay.

    @rizz, Thanks a lot, dude.

    And I never knew that U all had so many things in ur minds for my avatar. Somebody liked it and somebody hated it. hehehe :)

    Controversial avatar. :) lol......
     
  16. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    very good keep it coming!!!! post some more people all over the world is going to hear you.
     
  17. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    real nice sanjay... :)
     
  18. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks Rey and rockinaway.

    @rey, I've posted a poem on AIDS but got just a single reply. I want people to implement my poems in their real lives. See the 2nd/3rd page of the poetry forum.
     

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