Something That Should Be Read!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Oct 26, 2005.

  1. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    HI EVERYONE! ok now this is something i would like to share wid all of u! this is something that I HAVE NOT RITTEN! i again say that it is NOT MY WORK! i read it somewhere....... hope u all will like this wonderful piece of poetry... do tell wat u think of it....(this was ritten in a yearbook)


    And then we vanish
    We vanish like rings of smoke
    In the thin air
    Swirling around...
    Leaving behind a pile of ash...
    Ashes that r blown away by Time...
    Memories that fade away.
    But we all carry in us the essence of that existence.

    *there is more to it but i just posted the part which i think was REALLY NICE!*

    hope u all liked it....... do comment on it!
     
  2. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    tht was nice....post the full poem
     
  3. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    this is a demo..?

    ye.. wud luv to read the full version..

    nice lines though
     
  4. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ rizaaj..... lol...... NAHI it was not a demo yaar.... i said that i posted the part that I REALLY liked......... ga*d*y *ach*y! ;) lol

    @ wizard...i will post the rest latter...
     
  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    here's the rest...

    the life that once was...the memories that r...
    we have in us the ashen flavour of the smoke
    the blunt taste of the burning tobacco...
    the rising smoke that engulfes...
    we have in us The Waiting That Never Ends.
     

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