Its a nice try but nothing more than that. When singing a song there are lots of things you should pay attention at, Sur and Taal are the most important. In this song both aren't good, Sur faults at many places as the Taal isn't good either, you are out of Taal at many places too,try to improve it man. I'm not saying this to dishearten you or something like that, just to inform you the lacks in your song! I hope you understand what i tried to say! In the future post your songs in this section man: https://indianguitartabs.com/forumdisplay.php?f=26 Take care and keep posting man!!!
i am begginer Dear friend i am begginer i know many mistakes son i will improve with help of nice people like you i am in Ludhiana punjab and started learning old age i promise i will improve Best Wishes
