mar-mitne ki baat to sabhi karte hai.. mohabbat me koi hame jee dikhaye.. bah jaate hai saare aansuon ke sagar me.. koi pyaar ke ashq hume pee ke dikhaye.. pass-pass nahi par saath saath safar karte hai.. saamne nahi to kya hua,tere dil me basar karte hai.. durr rehte hai tumse iss duniya ki darr se.. jaaneman mohabbat me,hum bass itni kasar karte hai.. aankho me bhar ke pyaar ki masti niyat se jab woh bigadne lage saanse hamari atak si gayi thi hamari taraf jab woh badhne lage thami kalaai kaske unhone aur ishq ke bukhar humeko bhi chadhne lage roka bahot par ye dil na maana hum khud hi ke dil se zagdne lage... hum laakh chaahe tumko paana par ye duriyaa bhi to jaruri hai... hum to simat sakte hai baahon me aapke par ye hayaa hamari majburi hai... mohabbat bhari nazar se na dekha shikwa hai unko ke humne fir se na dekha... vida karne unko aaye the lekin mud ke dubaara dil se na dekha... unhone bhi to hamara ishaara na dekha aansuon se bikhrata sahara na dekha... na woh kadam apne roke,na woh dagmagaye issliye chupaye aansu,aur humne dobara na dekha... vaise to dil bekaraar nahi,par dil ko yuhi karaar nahi... chaha hai aapko magar, phir bhi aapse pyaar nahi... bharosa hai aap pe magar, dil pe hai aitbaar nahi... aapko paane ki umeed to nahi,par khone ko hum tayyar nahi... chaand ki shaan ho tum husn pe ehsaan ho tum dil ka armaan ho tum chahat ka ailaan ho tum par jo bhi ho... meri jaan ho tum..... dil ka haal tumhe bataau kaise.. ye armaan jataau kaise.. mera to yeh dil hi tum ho.. tumhara hi haal tumhe sunaau kaise.. looking forward for ur response... tell me if u like n tell me even if u dont....
Hey Nimisha .. U are a great poet i must say .. n to make it more fun for u .. i've come up wid somethin of muh own juz for fun Answers to all ur shayaries from 1st to last : (Yeah itz me again ) Ishq ki rah mein dil lagaana koi kasab nahi hota Mohabbat mein sirf jeena zindagi ka sabab nahi hota.. aap kehte ho ashq behte hai sagar mein .. khushq aankhon mein sailaab na ho aisa kab nahi hota ?? aap saath hai yeh humaari khushnaseebi hai.. Warna akele safar karna dushwar hota .. Duniya ko aag laga dete kasam se .. Agar isse ek baar aapka deedar hota .. aankhon mein humaari masti thi par niyyat ke zimmedaar tum the .. saanse tumhari atak si gayi aur hum madhoshi mein gum the.. rok na sake hum kadam apne kyunki humare dil ke hukum the.. jazbaato ke toofan Dilo mein aagaye phir bhi humaare lab gumsum the Chahat hoti dil mein to yu bahana na banaate .. Dekar pyaar ke waade hume begaana na banaate.. Dil mein simat jaana humne baahon se zaroori samjha.. warna aapki yaad mein yeh tarana na banaate.. aankhon mein humaari unhone mohabbat talash ki .. Dil mein dekhte to unhe is baat ka adab hota.. Yu Na karte shikaayat hum aapse .. to aapko is baat ka ehsaas kab hota ?? kadam nahi dagmagaye yeh aapne dekha .. Rota hua dil aap dekhte to gazab hota .. Aapne aansoon chupaye aur humne dard .. Na hote aansoon aur dard to ishq ek mazhab hota! bekaraari to ek ada hai humse pyaar chupaane ki.. Kasam li hai shayad aapne is tarah sataane ki .. Dil chura liya hai ab nazrein chura rahe hai woh Is kadar imtiha na lo chahat mein yeh deewane ki .. Chand ki shaan hai hum .. to uska aasra tum ho Husn pe ehsaan hai hum to uski haya tum ho Dil ka armaan hai hum to uski zubaa tum ho .. Chahat ka ailaan hai hum to uski wafa tum ho .. Hum to apki jaan hai par humaara jahaa ....... Tum ho Dil ka haal bataana zaroori nahi .. Nigahe yeh haal bayaan kar deti hai .. hume aapne apna dil maana .. Yahi sacchai humari aankhen bhar deti hai ..
Boy! took me ages to read both of your shayaris................ But it was really worth it ... Good job both of you.....
Yeah .. i understand it took a lotta time .. but itz really worth it .. i enjoyed nimisha's shayaries .. n equally enjoyed answerin them .. by da way .. no comments yet from nimisha as well as many other IGTians ???
wait for while notty... today im studying for my last university paper, u will get ur replies soon... n yes.. im amazed.. why other IGTians havent replied to such a good shayeris yet.. not boasting about mine... i mean that of notty's.. notty.. u r gr8.. hats off to u...
good work ....and all the best for your last uni...exam.... and ..if the your avtar is real...u r as beautifull as your shayari's
Thanx nimisha for throwin ur hats off : .. but i believe u are a great poet .. Yes u are .. lemme throw muh hats off too .. anyway .. i was expectin many more replies .. from other poets n IGTians .. coz there's so much original stuff in these two posts ..
main ishq ka koi kasab na jaanu... mohabbat ka koi gajab na jaanu... aankhon me jo utha rahe hai tufaan... unn ashqon ka main to sabab na jaanu...
zoothe hi sahi ye bahaane chale hai... wo hamsafar humko banaane chale hai... jo darrte the kal tak jamaane ki nazar se... aaj woh aag duniya ko lagane chale hai...
kadam unke bahekte hai... dil majboor hamara hota hai... masti unko chadhti hai... suroor hamara hota hai... badi ajib hai daastaan-e-mohabbat hamari... niyat unki bigadti hai... kasoor hamara hota hai...
bahaanon se hi bahaana ban jaata hai... apnon se hi begaana ban jaata hai... bahon ko chod ke, dil ko tod ke... bewafaai ka khud ek tarana ban jata hai...
agar tere dil ka hum adab jaante... roti aankhon ka gajab jaante... har jazbaat se judaa sabab jaante... shikayat aapko hai kab jaante... ishq ka jazbaa mazhab jaante... tere jazbon ka har ek kasab jaante... to kehte hum khudko, khuda ya khudaayee... jo teri adaayen hum sab jaante....
dil yuhi churaana mera shauk nahi hai... pyaar kar ke chupaana mera shauk nahi hai... nazre churaana to ek adaa hai hayaa ki... warna palke zukaana mera shauk nahi hai...
man oh man!!!Nimisha...you are A-W-E-S-O-M-E....simply :nw: :nw: :nw: :nw: looks like its the beginning for a major war here....what say Notty?: btw you did a great job too....but hats-off to nimisha... your shayries are absolutely b-e-auitful and your replies even more b-e-a-utifuler(made that up : ) .... reps for you.. and you too notty(if it doesnt tell me to spread more ) looking forward to your counter replies...this is goin to be fun :rock:
yes guys... please keep replying.. its so fun to reply ur words.... hardik.... hey man.....! thanks for all those compliments... really..it meant gr8 for me...
Hey first of all .. great ones nimisha .. i liked them .. but as u know it juz goes on .. .. n hey I take some credit .. coz u answered 6 out of 8 : .. i was actually expectin u to answer all .. anyway .. here i go again .. Kasab jaan loge to mann behal jaayega .. Mohabbat ki kashish se ji machal jayega.. Pyaar bhari nazar se ek baar dekhlo .. Aahe bharta hai jo har pal woh dil sambhal jayega
Duniya ki nazar se hume shikwa kabhi na tha .. jhoot bolne ka aapse iraada kabhi na tha .. duniya ko aag lagaane se bhi mohabbat na mili.. aur dil na jala sake kyunki woh humaara kabhi na tha