......some extra just for you

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rongbazzz, Jan 2, 2005.

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  1. rongbazzz

    rongbazzz F.U.C.K IS LIFE

    They fuck you up, your mum and dad,
    .....They may not mean to but they do
    They fill you with the faults they had
    .....And add some extra just for you.

    But they were fucked up in their turn
    .....By fools in old style hats and coats
    Who half the time were soppy-stern
    .....And half at one another's throats.

    Man hands on misery to man.
    .....It deepens like a coastal shelf.
    Get out as early as you can
    .....And don't have any kids yourself.

    guys how it is :think: ???? pls reply... :rockon: no no fuck on
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  2. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    seems like u don't like ur parents...lolz....nic poem though
  3. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Will be a nice Heavy metal........
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    must read 4 ur mom & dad

    :shock: :shock: nice 1 @rong.
    its a must read 4 ur mom & dad :)
    & also 4 ur kids.. oh soory.. :eek:: u said u wont be havin ny :p:

    bye tk cre
    chill :beer: SUbhro..
  5. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Nice. Different. I dun think its actually that he dislikes his mum and dad. I see it more like "Violence Breeds Violence". But it could be either way.
  6. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    ^^^^ LOLZ nice one .. a bit of change and nice change to the poetry section... lolz

    well done
  7. rongbazzz

    rongbazzz F.U.C.K IS LIFE

    subhro... change ur behev......it is jus a poem....i m not sluging u :cen:
  8. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    cool it @ rong.. was just kiddin.. no offence..
    sorry if u took it the wrong way.. no hard feelins..

    nywayz.. it was a damn good poem :)

    bye tk cre
    chill :beer: Subhro.
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Hey rongbazzz, cool down buddy, Subhro was just kidding. It's life. So, ups and downs are always there.
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ye accha hai........
    ek purana sher yaad aaya...bhool gaya..leave it but bahuut .. accha hai :)
  11. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    :think:...iam confused......but kinda diff.
  12. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Must say...very different from the rest of the sob poems that we (including me) write and usually getto read in this section....
    i guess we all feel like this atleast once in our lifetime.. oops let me not generalise.
    Atleast i ve felt like this.... once or twice..maybe

    I liked it !! :)

    psst: You planning to be another DINK? :beer:
  13. rongbazzz

    rongbazzz F.U.C.K IS LIFE

    @knight-thnx but i didnt undrstnd what do u mean by DINK?
  14. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Double income No kids

    btw how was it posting something not written by you..
    feels good eh?:)
  15. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^Thanks martina, for bringing it to my notice :)

    This poem's by Philip Larkin.

    @rongbazzz.. stop taking credit for what u didnt write!

    *thread closed*
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