......some extra just for you

They fuck you up, your mum and dad,
.....They may not mean to but they do
They fill you with the faults they had
.....And add some extra just for you.

But they were fucked up in their turn
.....By fools in old style hats and coats
Who half the time were soppy-stern
.....And half at one another's throats.

Man hands on misery to man.
.....It deepens like a coastal shelf.
Get out as early as you can
.....And don't have any kids yourself.

guys how it is :think: ???? pls reply... :rockon: no no fuck on

 

seems like u don't like ur parents...lolz....nic poem though

 

Will be a nice Heavy metal........

 

must read 4 ur mom & dad

:shock: :shock: nice 1 @rong.
its a must read 4 ur mom & dad
& also 4 ur kids.. oh soory.. : u said u wont be havin ny :

bye tk cre
chill :beer: SUbhro..

 

Nice. Different. I dun think its actually that he dislikes his mum and dad. I see it more like "Violence Breeds Violence". But it could be either way.

 

^^^^ LOLZ nice one .. a bit of change and nice change to the poetry section... lolz

well done

 

subhro... change ur behev......it is jus a poem....i m not sluging u :cen:

 

cool it @ rong.. was just kiddin.. no offence..
sorry if u took it the wrong way.. no hard feelins..

nywayz.. it was a damn good poem

bye tk cre
chill :beer: Subhro.

 

Hey rongbazzz, cool down buddy, Subhro was just kidding. It's life. So, ups and downs are always there.

 

ye accha hai........
ek purana sher yaad aaya...bhool gaya..leave it but bahuut .. accha hai

 

:think:...iam confused......but kinda diff.

 

Must say...very different from the rest of the sob poems that we (including me) write and usually getto read in this section....
i guess we all feel like this atleast once in our lifetime.. oops let me not generalise.
Atleast i ve felt like this.... once or twice..maybe

I liked it !!

psst: You planning to be another DINK? :beer:

 

@knight-thnx but i didnt undrstnd what do u mean by DINK?

 

Double income No kids

btw how was it posting something not written by you..
feels good eh?

 

^Thanks martina, for bringing it to my notice

This poem's by Philip Larkin.

@rongbazzz.. stop taking credit for what u didnt write!

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