solitude my soul cried in solitude as it longed for solace in your arms life felt as it it had lost all its charms nothing else seems to matter any more i longed for the day i had before comforting me and making me so secure i missed the heaven i felt with you as i looked at the hell forced upon me soul yearned for the touch of your love as it cried in silence... feeling the vacuousness within it self it burned from inside out making me really doubt if there was anyone called "god" if he gave me your love in my life then just for that why do i have to fight many questions pursued in my mind i tossed and turned trying to sleep i look at your face which reminded me oh how you were and what you meant to thee but all that didn't seems to ease the pain in me and i continued to burn in solitude
Keep it up... I can see that you like writing love and heartache poems, like many others... why don't you try some other theme? (In fact, this goes to everyone...)
desi, thanks... essi... i belive that poetry is some thing that comes from heart.. you never look for words..words find your soul...so what ever is in heart and soul is what is on paper....these poems were written some time back.. life goes on and time changed.. i will post some +ve ones too how is that.. life is like a glass half full or half empty...depends on where you are looking from .. mavrick, open your heart and see what is written on your soul... thks all SCN
True what you say... But sometimes words don't find their way and then you must walk part of the way to find them too... Just my (as someone said) $0.02.
essi,, most of the time i let them walk as much as they can... rest of the road i walk towards them..
ok, suchacutename, but i think lotsa ppl write about love, and other emotions have nothing to their credit.
