sochanaa kabhi ke, meri jagah pe hote.. kya itne tadapate?? kya itne hi rote?? jab koi de jaata, gumon ka dariyaa jo rehtaa naa koi, aur jeene ka jariyaa.. khwabon ke sholon pe kya aansu bhigote?? kya itne sulagte?? kya itne hi rote??....................sochanaa kabhi ke, meri jagah pe hote.. sambhale bhi kitana, ye jee na sambhlata yaadon ke phoolon ka daaman bikharataa.. kaanto ki chaadar kya dil pe firote?? kya itne sisakte?? kya itne hi rote??....................sochanaa kabhi ke, meri jagah pe hote.. dil ban jaata, armaanon ka tamaasha aankhe nahi bass, aansuon ka janaaja.. fir ye palake kis zeher me dubote?? kya itane hi marate?? kya itne hi rote??....................sochanaa kabhi ke, meri jagah pe hote..
na tadapta na sulagta na sisakta aur na hi rota haath pakar tujhe apna banata agar mein teri jagah pe hota....
itna dard.... ye kahan tha bhai abhi tak ..loog sahi kehte hain chere bane hi asliyat chupane ke liye hai ...hmmm "khwabon ke sholon pe kya aansu bhigote??"...vah vah and very sad so naah jo bhi tha i think u suld not have posted this ....anyhow bahhhuuuuuuuuuuuuttttt acchi nazm thi ....likhti rahiye
@ nil, bish, amit, madhuresh thanks for replying guys! glad u all liked it.. as it was straight from the heart.. atleast someone cud feel pain in it!!!!!
khafi dard bhari dastaan hai apki agar hum aapki jagah par hote to shayad ye kavita aaj hum likhte...
