Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Mar 25, 2018.

  1. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    I might have caught it wrong,
    But often when my left cant make much to compare,
    And the right is short of words,
    It makes someting to create a sense,
    Like u, as a whole..
    You are the smell of the coockies,
    This smell I remember from the backery called eloras,
    It was right behind the football ground,
    The old lady with her British accent & mannerism,
    Cookies per 2 rs that used to be costly,
    I never had enough in my khakee half pants,
    But the lady always gave 2 for whatever money i had,
    And it filled my hunger with that amazing taste,
    Ohh yes the smell, though years after,
    But i somehow whenever tired and sweated,
    That sweet smell of cookies as i look at u.
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  2. lochand94

    lochand94 New Member

  3. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    Thanks. U play awesome leads
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  4. lochand94

    lochand94 New Member

    And you write awesome poetry
  5. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Is this based on reality?

    Nevertheless, it took me there :)
  6. KixFlirty

    KixFlirty Member

    I do love cookies...honey...

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