smitten ..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Jan 18, 2012.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i am just trying to write something .. but i guess i won't be able to ..
    trying to write smthing about US ..but i guess i won't be able to ..
    for what we share..is beyond all the words that the world can ever know
    we have a bond .. we have a relation that i cannot express..i can never show .
    going down this beautiful lane..that's filled with red roses
    i smell ecstasy and bliss without faking any poses
    when i first walked on this street .. it seemed to b so dark and gloomy
    i just walked with a hope that MAYBE sometime soon i'd find a companion ..i'd find my homie
    and here i am .. still walking here .. but i am not alone
    im still here .. holding hands of an angel ..yes ..i am not on my own
    im walking with some one i cannot walk without ..it feels just like a dream when i smell him close
    he asks me to give him a name..and all i think about is .. ..what matches him .. what's so excellent..a star..? an angel or a red rose?
    and then i know my answer i am lying to myself ..i cannot give him a name. because.i cannot let anything share him
    then i think i am crazy ..but i can't help it .. i think about him all day all night..wen the sun is bright .. or the light is dim
    people often told me about soul mates but i thought of it as utter crap
    but now i can't help but think the same .. when i am with him under this wrap
    when i look deep into his cute little eyes
    i see me as something so important ..like some prestigious prize
    when he touches me i forget that there exists a world different than this
    all i can think about is..that he is mine and i am his
    he hugs me tight ..he holds me close and i feel him breathing on my face
    he kisses me and ..i wish that the world would stand still and never find its pace
    i am bad at expressing myself .i don't know what to say ..the paper is teasing me.. or maybe its just me or maybe its him
    i stammer i quiver coz i think its too good to be true .. sometimes when i feel him .. i know my eyes wel up ..emotions at the brim
    i can't really define him . actually i don't want to.its something too personal. and it is the toughest thing i have ever known
    you really want to know him? naah ..i won't tell coz i hide him from the world .. you'll find him in my breath ..you 'll find him in my moans

    are you just looking at me and thinking that i am insane?
    what will you do? you'll chide me but i tell you beforehand..its gonna go in vain
    i just know and i want you to know that i love him and will do so forever
    i know that nature has played weird games with us ..it has acted way too clever
    but i know when i am with him ..i spit on nature's rule and relations
    all i can think of and all i really think is that he is the world's best creation
    i say this not because i am partial i say this because its so true
    he's my smile .. he's my lifeline .. all the time ..but more so ..when he says .. " i love you "
    and i find my real happiness when i kiss these words back with my lips .. " oh! i love you too "
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    someone's got lucky it seems ... Nice lines... :]
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    lol . .. yes ..you are right.. somebody's me :p
     
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Call me an old romantic but I thought this was a great line. The rest of it is fairly personal so I wouldn't really say anything more than congratulations, I suppose.
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member


    haha..thanku :) btw hi5 ..i think i am an old school romantic too .. ;) :)
     
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    no more replies on this?? :(
     
  7. ur romancing with ur poetry.. poetries are an admiration of feelings so is this creation of urs.. nice expression

    keep posting !!
     
  8. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    :)
    thank you
     
  9. fairandlovely

    fairandlovely peeka-boo

    I wish you had not capitalized the US because after that I read the whole poem picturing your special bond with USA and it fit perfectly with how a cousin of mine feels.

    I like it. I think your trying to hard to rhyme but its still nice.
     
  10. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    lol..
    thnku :)
     

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