smitten ..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Jan 18, 2012.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i am just trying to write something .. but i guess i won't be able to ..
    trying to write smthing about US ..but i guess i won't be able to ..
    for what we beyond all the words that the world can ever know
    we have a bond .. we have a relation that i cannot express..i can never show .
    going down this beautiful lane..that's filled with red roses
    i smell ecstasy and bliss without faking any poses
    when i first walked on this street .. it seemed to b so dark and gloomy
    i just walked with a hope that MAYBE sometime soon i'd find a companion ..i'd find my homie
    and here i am .. still walking here .. but i am not alone
    im still here .. holding hands of an angel ..yes ..i am not on my own
    im walking with some one i cannot walk without feels just like a dream when i smell him close
    he asks me to give him a name..and all i think about is .. ..what matches him .. what's so excellent..a star..? an angel or a red rose?
    and then i know my answer i am lying to myself ..i cannot give him a name. because.i cannot let anything share him
    then i think i am crazy ..but i can't help it .. i think about him all day all night..wen the sun is bright .. or the light is dim
    people often told me about soul mates but i thought of it as utter crap
    but now i can't help but think the same .. when i am with him under this wrap
    when i look deep into his cute little eyes
    i see me as something so important some prestigious prize
    when he touches me i forget that there exists a world different than this
    all i can think about is..that he is mine and i am his
    he hugs me tight ..he holds me close and i feel him breathing on my face
    he kisses me and ..i wish that the world would stand still and never find its pace
    i am bad at expressing myself .i don't know what to say ..the paper is teasing me.. or maybe its just me or maybe its him
    i stammer i quiver coz i think its too good to be true .. sometimes when i feel him .. i know my eyes wel up ..emotions at the brim
    i can't really define him . actually i don't want to.its something too personal. and it is the toughest thing i have ever known
    you really want to know him? naah ..i won't tell coz i hide him from the world .. you'll find him in my breath 'll find him in my moans

    are you just looking at me and thinking that i am insane?
    what will you do? you'll chide me but i tell you beforehand..its gonna go in vain
    i just know and i want you to know that i love him and will do so forever
    i know that nature has played weird games with us has acted way too clever
    but i know when i am with him ..i spit on nature's rule and relations
    all i can think of and all i really think is that he is the world's best creation
    i say this not because i am partial i say this because its so true
    he's my smile .. he's my lifeline .. all the time ..but more so ..when he says .. " i love you "
    and i find my real happiness when i kiss these words back with my lips .. " oh! i love you too "
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    someone's got lucky it seems ... Nice lines... :]
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    lol . .. yes are right.. somebody's me :p
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Call me an old romantic but I thought this was a great line. The rest of it is fairly personal so I wouldn't really say anything more than congratulations, I suppose.
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    haha..thanku :) btw hi5 ..i think i am an old school romantic too .. ;) :)
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    no more replies on this?? :(
  7. ur romancing with ur poetry.. poetries are an admiration of feelings so is this creation of urs.. nice expression

    keep posting !!
  8. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you
  9. fairandlovely

    fairandlovely peeka-boo

    I wish you had not capitalized the US because after that I read the whole poem picturing your special bond with USA and it fit perfectly with how a cousin of mine feels.

    I like it. I think your trying to hard to rhyme but its still nice.
  10. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnku :)

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