hows this geometry so skewed may be over the years the line and the circle have screwed up the relationship may be the other screwed up figures have pushed them or the vast nothingness of this clean page like which i write has made them soo lonely .. the circle still has managed to stabilize may be its her figure which meets the eyes, gives her a false excuse of being stable at-lest by the other figures but the line the straight line the shortest distance it cant stand alone it has never done very well that way can you ever see a straight line in any natural figure never it needs the curve of the circle to be shaped for a soothing look some bigger lines just came around a bunch of lines and captivated them some clean places are reserved for stronger lines lines have developed an arrow head over them a head that has taken over the real head squeezed twisted banged bruised secluded battling for survival some arrowheads have gone crazy the dark-side of paper has adopted them and move in groups to violate the circle, tear it, temper it revenge the dejected need labeled as greed if they ask why tell them thats extream nature of lines when they cant find circles to mold them when they dont stick with geometry to hold them .. where is my eraser...
That's awe-fvcking-some! I would have repped it ten times over if I could! I have never seen such lucid poetry, especially one involving metaphor! Got to be the best of yours, probably the best one posted on IGT in a long long time!
that was really geometrical guess : on a serious note..its very well written.. unconventional is the word for it i think.. different..
ya 6 years even more .. i stick around people/place for soo long that ultimately all others leave "i followed u up 4 years later though " > Pleasure is all mine mam.. personas like urs care to follow we mortals !!
hehe..iv been using this site before 2009..but i hadnt registered then : anddd...hehhe.. *blush blush * ^_^
