hum rote rhe raat bhr uss zalim ko zara bhi na kadar thi hum aankhei sujaate rhe uss zalim ko zara bhi na khabar thi hum jaam lutate gye us zalim ko zara bhi na bhanak lgi saansein hichkichati rhi raat bhr usne fir bhi na hmari khabar li subah uthkr kitni asaani se bss vo keh gya zara siskian daba lo...
bahut khoob... kitni rook li kitni beh gayi boondain ya to main jaanu, ya takiya jaane.. I loved your poem but i would say this could have been even more beautiful if you could have started with some story line and then concluded with your last lines
