LORD sarat...im still gaping!!!! :shock: Man you really are gnna keep us in the wait huh??? How LOONNGGG!!????? .. um..but man did she get you that bad???
^What can i say, she was the sweetest, and it'll be nice to say who she ahem.. is.........thank you ;-)
Well thats terribly adorable...^^ And...if i may something...dont lose hope, kiddo. There'll be mre if you cant really have her. But, im totally bowled over the usage and flow. The visuals and...WWWOOOWWW... Im telling you...get em published.
^"causes regret and reassures at the same time" I can be sure she'll be there for me always, this way we can safely ignore all the pains associated with a romantic relationship : And thank you very much, i wasnt aware it was that good :
Amazing and Superb! But Bro, I never thought that even U can go after a girl. Well, we all are human beings!
Beautiful lines... So dis... who's this one for?? :think: :grin: Keep writing bro... Looking forward for more... REgards, Zooom..!!
hmmmm.....so is it S___h or not???????:think: U r driving the curious mind of mine crazy!!!!!!!!:think:
I read da poem initially .. didn't get da feel .. I re-read n this time read it from ur gal's point of view.. n I could like totally see da romantic side of u .. Nice way to express ur feelings .. n Hey i found somethin really ironic.. n Yet u've used them to express wat u feel ?? Yes .. Its not upto da mark .. But Definitely worth reading .. Keep 'em comin .. PS - I might use this on some gal .. Is it copyrighted ? :
^Thanks a lot bro. As for the irony you refer to, yes i suppose that could be used against me. But it was all in an attempt to try to express what i felt. And yeah, i knew from the beginning this wasnt upto the mark, this theme is simply not my area of expertise. And of course you can use this whenever you want to, one of the initial motives i had in mind was that (almost) anybody should send this poem to their loved ones and it should make sense. Way off target, but it was a good attempt, i think.
Damn, i didnt actually see this thread till today. One of the very few poems that i enjoyed and still show the emo sde of somebody. : :grin: great (fast) work though :beer:
LOL: Yay emo, but not for me :grin: Thought i'd write about this theme to see how it'd come out, mediocrity at it's best, thanks bro :beer:
