Shairana Haqeeqat - ORG composition

hey.. check out a rough version of something i composed.. its kinda Mohammed Rafi style.. so not much of you will like it..

https://www.soundclick.com/raxa

dump your comments .. and yea.. ignore the sliding sounds

 

yeah!! quite classic like..
sorry but y is there such scratching sound when ur switching chords? : new strings or u need more practise :grin: nice attempt!

 

yea.. new strings.. and offcourse need a lot more practise..

 

Hey ,.. nice composition rizaaj.... it takes balls to come up with yr own stuff.... this is farrrrrrrrrrrrr more better than any covers!!!

reps for u!!! Post more original stuff if u have!

 

yeah..happens!!
keep adding to ur soundclick
..here comes my first rep!

 

cool man .. good composition .. if guitarin would have been smooth .. n a li'l more hard work .. it would have been juz too good .. but kudos to u man .. I juz love original stuff .. reps for u .. keep 'em comin ..

 

thanks.. vini..

@akky .. ur word mean a lot.. ya a couple more tunes ready.. just waiting for some decent lyrics to pass through my mind

@notty.. thanks

 

just beautiful ... nice lyrics, good voice, fine guitar work .. over all 8/10 but since its original .. i'll give you 9/10
u have the talent .. just polish it a bit .. and yeah do keep em comin .. i mean it!!

 

^^ aah thanks.. been waiting for you comment anxiously

 

GOOD WORK MAN! :beer: cha gaye ho! :rock: btw where r u aj kal?

 

nice composition,pretty nice lyrics too....&gr8 voice...
keep em coming rizaaj...:beer:

 

@Gandi Bachi -- thanks... yaar nowadays busy with job + studies.. thats why baat nahi hoti.. sorry...

@hardik... thanks pal.. yea trying to make it upto nex level..

and yea the lyrics part.. that was done by my brother.. i bet i cannot even think in such tough urdu.. :

 

yaaar good................good composition

 

thanks ozzy..

suggest some good fills if anyone can help me...