left the motherland achieved par excellence fame ,money ,status..all what i could think off drived by ambition making myself emotionally deaf and dumb never falling prey to those heart wrenching themes brought the glory to all back home neither hold anyone in hug..feeling love will hold my steps with age felt someone near to listen my woes felt like home calling .... returned back to home felt as stranger as noone was there except the broken pillars of home and windows noone knew me by my name... parents left abode many years back angered on emotional breakup i punished them by never calling them..... tears rolled up on my cheeks lost my core of immortal support after long years i am crying for the things i gained in another country.... money,fame name... all looked as useless... i lost the whole life to prove myself big for the person i adore... my emotional attachment shadowed the sentiments for my parents what i have..... rohit astroguru26
Rohit, people not commenting on your poems doesn't mean they're worthless As for this one, I can 'feel' it more than your other poems somehow, although the (many) grammatical mistakes make it a bit harder to appreciate it. A good effort, though
disntinctness is always counted.....for you too......you have separate style and variations...............i admire that you can feel the sameness....monotonous identity of words.....even theme is differnt in mine creation...... keep reading ... rohit astroguru26
