Setting Sunrise (The Bad verse that needs to be changed) Sitting on my own Chewin on a bone Sitting all alone Head feeling like a stone Questions unfound Answers untold All is contained In the depths of the soul What is truth when all is built with lies? What is right? What is love when all the world is blind? How will they see it's light Close your eyes Turn off your mind Open up your heart Let it soak in the sunrise When I slip, who will catch my fall? Those who've never heeded my call? Loneliness will slide out of the mind When you find your best frind inside I found a best friend in me Who sees what no one can see Who is what no one has been Watch me lift the sun and shine What is truth when all is built with lies? How will we find the light? What is love when all the world is blind? Inside the heart the light, it shines so very bright Close your eyes Turn off your mind Open up your heart Let it soak in the sunrise Dream your dreams to form the clouds Cling to them to raise them high Limits never last forever Live your dreams to fill the sky Close your eyes Turn off your mind Open up your heart Let it soak in the sunrise (Sitting on my own Chewing on a bone Sitting all alone Head feeling like a stone) Feelings old as time Time could write no rhyme Half the world moves on The rest, they wait in line
Feelings old as time Time could write no rhyme Half the world moves on The rest, they wait in line th was nice.. reps
Thanks man. Thanks all. Yeah, That verse totally blew me away when i first wrote it :rule: Haha, it's hard to be humble when you're as great as I am : Haha, i'm kidding. But yeah. I have no complaints with that bit. Thanks again.
I've written the verse. Substitute (Sitting on my own, chewing on a bone. Sitting all alone head feeling like a stone "crap") with Sittin on my own The soul a dreamer's throne Dreaming all alone Feelings swept in a cyclone. For some reason, I'm not able to edit my original post I can't seem to find the option. They've changed the layout of the site quite a bit, it's looking good, I just can't find what I'm looking for.
