' Set Free Your Heart...! ' ( English Ghazal )

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jun 22, 2007.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Life in a rigid shell must be as hell, Amanush
    Free your heart and allow it to yell, Amanush

    The past is over, and future still not ensured
    This present ought to be used well, Amanush

    Each has a single date but time is not yet ripe
    To time’s tail, no one can tie a bell, Amanush

    Was too much love that caused pride to swell
    Do tell in some ghazal what befell, Amanush

    Emanated feelings of sincere hearts are divine
    Scent of true love is the best smell, Amanush

    Whose splendour excels in nature’s every cell
    His Perfect name Love let us spell, Amanush

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  2. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    ahem ahem...Amanush ;)
    ... :) ...hmm....dat.was...gooood..Amanush..
    wen i read da 1st 2 lines. i thot..u used amanush...2 make it rhyme ,Amanush..
    but..i was wrong, Amanush ;)

    take care , Amanush..
    KeeP ryting ,Amanush.. :p: :) ;)

    hmmmmmmmm...dat was nice......

    .dont mind.!! :) ..ws kiddin.!!
  3. #iR@


    great to have u back! :) like always nice work
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wah amanush !
    acchi gazal thi
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    khoob kahaa!!
  6. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    shabash, amanush

    your few lines said what hundreds of pages cant
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    definitely nice..but since i have read ur previous works..i can say, u can do better than that!

    keep posting..
  8. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    Subhan allah.. my 1st english gazal.. thinking how jagjit singh will sing it..

    liked it
  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    I like how you addressed yourself! Nice work, I especially liked the line "Free your heart and allow it to yell"

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