Life in a rigid shell must be as hell, Amanush Free your heart and allow it to yell, Amanush The past is over, and future still not ensured This present ought to be used well, Amanush Each has a single date but time is not yet ripe To time’s tail, no one can tie a bell, Amanush Was too much love that caused pride to swell Do tell in some ghazal what befell, Amanush Emanated feelings of sincere hearts are divine Scent of true love is the best smell, Amanush Whose splendour excels in nature’s every cell His Perfect name Love let us spell, Amanush
ahem ahem...Amanush ... ...hmm....dat.was...gooood..Amanush.. wen i read da 1st 2 lines. i thot..u used amanush...2 make it rhyme ,Amanush.. but..i was wrong, Amanush take care , Amanush.. KeeP ryting ,Amanush.. : hmmmmmmmm...dat was nice...... .dont mind.!! ..ws kiddin.!! cya!!
definitely nice..but since i have read ur previous works..i can say, u can do better than that! keep posting..
I like how you addressed yourself! Nice work, I especially liked the line "Free your heart and allow it to yell"
