Sentimental side of me ;)

Hey guys .. i had this very bad patch wid a gal .. n had written a few shayaries for her .. on different occasions .. so juz thought of sharing it wid ya .. here v go ..

1. Jaa rahe ho aap hume akela chhodkar ..
Tanhaiyon ki taraf humaari nigah modkar ..
Mumkin hai is tanhai mein jeena hoga mushkil ..
Dhadkane jaa rahi hai kyunki, Ehsaas chhodkar!

2. Dil ki choto ko kuch aur zakhm de jaate..
Juda hone se pehle kuch aur gam de jaate..
Is dil mein abhi aur bhi zakhmon ki jagah hai ..
Bewafai ki tumne, Ilzaam hume de jaate !

3. Nazrein karti hai shikayat yeh humse ..
Milna chahti hai aaj yeh tumse ..
Badi muddat hui aapka deedar na hua..
Tanhaiyon ne ki hai aaj fariyaad yeh tumse!

4. Chaha tha jise humne har pal, woh hume mila nahi..
Phool manga tha khuda se lekin kaanta bhi mila nahi ..
Andhero ke aalam mein roshni ki aarzoo thi..
Dil jalaana chaha lekin woh bhi jala nahi ..


I bet u didn't expect this from a notty lad anyway tell me wat u think ..

 

the3rd and 4rth are good..................

and yes from ur name i didnt expect so much shayro shayri but i gues every one has this side ...........u just showed it........

in all -a nice effort......:rock:

 

All r good...esp. the 2 & 4....

& yea...its always gud to do smthng which no1 expects 4m u....to b the talk of the town

neways, it was indeed a gud effort....keep them rolling in

 

Hello ji aap to chhupe rustom nikle

lovely shayari dude
do post some more

and write some More......

 

Thanx ak & garima .. thanx for ur appreciation .. n bubbly .. hmm .. i'll keep muh comments to muhself

 

n oops .. i forgot .. Thanx for da reps sweetypie bubbly

 

3. Nazrein karti hai shikayat yeh humse ..
Milna chahti hai aaj yeh tumse ..
Badi muddat hui aapka deedar na hua..
Tanhaiyon ne ki hai aaj fariyaad yeh tumse!

answr
hamari nazaron se aapko hamesha hi shikayat rahi...
aapne na jaana par hamesha aap ki hi chahat rahi..
aapne to sirf tanhaayion me yaad kiya humko..
hume to mehfilon me bhi aapke deedar ki kinaayat rahi...

 

Re:

Whats cookin' man? :think:

Damn..too good man. How about using them for some song composition

U guyzz rule :rule:

 

hey.. nothin cooking yaar...

n thanks..for compliments...

 

^^^ who is coooking wat ?? i m really hungry yaar :

 

My Turn

Shikayat karna humaari aadat to nahi..Hoti to pyar nahi kiya hota
Chaahat thi aapke dil mein ye ek baar to izhaar kiya hota ?
aap kehte ho hume har mehfil mein aapne talaash kiya ??
Hum to aapke dil mein the kaash ek baar dekh liya hota..

I had promised not to post any poem here .. but i'm posting coz of two people.. Vishwa yes .. bcoz of u .. n of course nimisha ..
I guess cryptic will be glad by this .. aren't u ?? n moreover it'l prove i hold no grudges .. love u guys ..

 

Hey notty.. u hv the talent.. only thing is that u hv to bring it out.. let ppl say watever they feel.. i m really feeling good that u started to write again..

keep rocking both with the pen and the guitar...

 

shikayat karna humaari aadat to nahi..Hoti to pyar nahi kiya hota
Chaahat thi aapke dil mein ye ek baar to izhaar kiya hota ?
aap kehte ho hume har mehfil mein aapne talaash kiya ??
Hum to aapke dil mein the kaash ek baar dekh liya hota..

thats awesome

answer
chup chup ke dil me rehnaa kafi nahi hota...
darr darr ke pyaar karnaa kafi nahi hota...
labzon ki bhi jarurat hai.. haai-e-dil kehne ko...
sirf aankho se izhaar karnaa kafi nahi hota...

 

One try in fight of poets... my reply to that...

Nimisha:

chup chup ke dil me rehnaa kafi nahi hota...
darr darr ke pyaar karnaa kafi nahi hota...
labzon ki bhi jarurat hai.. haai-e-dil kehne ko...
sirf aankho se izhaar karnaa kafi nahi hota...

Answer:

Pyar koi Kitab nahi jise tum padh sako..
Yeh koi sawal nahi jiska jawab tum de sako..
Pyar ki boli to ankhon se bayan hoti hai...
Bina kuch kahe bhi aankhen keh jaati hai..

 

vishwa:
Pyar koi Kitab nahi jise tum padh sako..
Yeh koi sawal nahi jiska jawab tum de sako..
Pyar ki boli to ankhon se bayan hoti hai...
Bina kuch kahe bhi aankhen keh jaati hai..

good one.....

here is ur answer vishwa...

kitabon me likhi baate sirf kehne ki hai...
aankho ke kuch uljhe jawaab sahne ki hai...
jo pyaar chup rahe wo hota nahi mukammal...
jarurat to baat hothon pe rehne ki hai...

 

hmmm .. ok ..

here i go again

Dar jaate agar hum to na aasmaan na zameen hoti
khamoshi ko aap samajhte to har raat haseen hoti
lafzon ki to sarhadein hoti hai.. unki ek hadh hoti hai
jazbaato ko lafzon mein utaarte to unki tauheen hoti

 

thats is simply awesome nautty....
u r too good...

answer for u....

jazbaato ko lafzon mein utaarnaa naa koi numaayish hai...
isse to izhaar kahte hai, ye pyaar ki aajmayish hai...
wo pyaar kya karegaa kaayar,jo ek labj na keh sake...
dil ki baat dil khol ke kehnaa hi mohabbat ki farmayish hai...

 

thanx for da compliment nimisha .. but here..

Kaun kehta hai band hoto se izhaar nahi hota
Kya bandh aankhon se kabhi kisika deedar nahi hota ??
yeh to aapki naadaani hai ki ilzaam hume dete ho..
warna Chahte hume aap dil se to jeena dushwaar nahi hota ..

 

Wah!!.....Fantabulous work people... .Total Jugalbandi

 

Kaun kehta hai band hoto se izhaar nahi hota
Kya bandh aankhon se kabhi kisika deedar nahi hota ??
yeh to aapki naadaani hai ki ilzaam hume dete ho..
warna Chahte hume aap dil se to jeena dushwaar nahi hota ..

true indeed... but im not over yet...



answer for u again...

izhaar karanaa bhi ek kasab hai...
jo kar sako to bahot gazab hai...
tum to darrte ho meri ruswaayionse...
warnaa nazaron ki baat to bass ek sabab hai...