Hey guys' Really need 2 get ur comments for these lyrics.............. Knight_guitar are u there..........i am waiting I would really apreciate all the comments bye........for now and enjoy the lyrics............. Got to be, there’s got to be A better way to make it real All the times I think about u Can’t stop the way I feel You don’t come and you don’t go Only glances is what I steal All the times I think about you Can’t stop the way I feel Slowly and slowly it grips me Then it goes over and trips me Into the dark horizon I can almost feel the poison Into my blood it’s smearing Hear laughter end is nearing So I say my prayers tonight Stay on u wicked night Try to stay I same tonight But I don’t recognize Emptiness is killing me Now I think I’ll disappear You don’t tend to notice me Although you can see so clear Fragments of fallacies Woven on to exterior All the times I think about you Come on lets make it real Slowly and slowly it grips me Then it goes over and trips me Into the dark horizon I can almost feel the poison It’s in my whole existence I can put up no resistance So I say my prayers tonight Put up with one last fight
great one. no more word to say. fortunately or unfortunately, knowingly or unkwnowingly i relate myself to this poem, i pray kudha hampe kare rehem. but i didnt understand these lines though "Hear laughter end is nearing So I say my prayers tonight Stay on u wicked night Try to stay I same tonight But I don’t recognize" please clarify what you mean.... if you wish i'll try composing this one...can i? if you already did, do upload the song.
hi Sharom, Thanks for the appreciation.... well i will clarify these lines for u.. Its like u are putting on a smile even though u see the the....... it that the relationship or anyhthing u call it(ur love) is not going anywhere..........theres no future but u are also praying for the dark days to stay , cause u are finding comfort in them You are trying to stay good, but just cant help urself detiorating............. Hope u got the idea.......... Well dude , i haven't composed it......i have a general tune in mind ....just that nothing else would really appreciate if u would compose it....make it kind of a dark rock composition...may be like evanecense or metalica...... thanks for the comments...........and do reply bye.............
I just love this.. !!! .. first time u making me read poetry and lyrics forum with something to think about..i just love dark lyrics.. dude reps from my side.. and tell me what tune u got.. oh btw.. i made a little thing with ur last lyrics sounds good to me will send u that ...
Hey good to hear frm u dude..........and thanks for those words of appreciation. the tune for the lyrics of self destruct is in my mind .........basically a general way as to how it goes i cant compose it as i cant play an instrument.............i am in the process of learnin the guitar ...........so that i can compose ok talking abouth the last lyrics 'spaces'....i would love to hear what u have done with it. Actually even i have composed this one........by fluke, but it does sound good ITs D G C D for the verses ..............Am , Dm, D & G for the chorus.............and the riff G D C for the part..........where u going , where u going , where u going now. its kind of a fast composition I just cant wait to hear the composition for ' spaces'..........and if u can try to compose the above one 2 ........kinda somethin dark. just upload it so that others can her it or mail me at [snip] see ya bye.......... and make it
Out of the three poems/lyrics that I've seen from you, I found this one to be the best.. keep up the good work dude! I just loved it! reps for u!
well thanks dude.........guess people have startednoticing me at IGT..grt And these are lyrics dude.........well u can call it a poem,but intended 2 be done into song.....u can try composing if u want 2 bye for now.......... regards
