Hey ths song is my self composed song.....its nt all set abhi.....bt still i cudnt wait 2 get comments frm u all exceptional musicians out dere.... here it is... https://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=754187 wud b waitin fr sum helpful comments....
dude i loved the song! esp the high parts! little out of sur.... i actually listened to this song 4-5times....the starting part you could just pluck and keep singing very softly......then add a bit of a prelude then start the song.... please post the lyrics and the chords you've used... but keep going and add a few more lines to it....it looks very short.... cheers! :beer:
As Sukrut already said, there are some Sur faults here and there, so try to improve it. And i also agree, try to add some more lines on this track! In my opinion, you used too much delay, i should decrease it a bit. Overall a good track and i'll wait for the whole track, keep going and take care man!
Nice composition man. Work out some more. And did you use two voices as is seen or its echo mixing. anyway its the mukda part which carries the song. the antara needs some variation. and dont use too much yeah and ohh... its not that it looks bad but too much of it takes away its shine. may be its my own personal opinion. good job. work it in full. and as the words are urs u can add anything u want according to ur liking.