Seduction (original!) - Chilled/eerie, acoustic/synth/strings etc

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by Fatima, Aug 16, 2007.

  1. Fatima

    Fatima Talent Unlimited <img src="images/smilies/worthy.g

    Hello all

    First original in AGES.

    Had a bit of a mess around on garageband - keeps me amused for hours!


    They talk a little less
    Use their eyes a little more
    Her skin, his fingertips
    Dark secrets in the hall

    A kiss upon the stairs
    A whisper in her ear
    Trapped between the wall
    And him, who pushed her there

    She makes a quick escape
    Playfully laughing
    As she runs
    He twists her by the arm
    Forces her to look at him
    And she is gone

    He takes her to the back
    Puts one arm around her waist
    Faces cheek to cheek
    As they begin to sway

    To the music of the night
    Of owls and rustled leaves
    Heavy sighs in the moonlight
    Dance their way through the breeze

    Her fingers linked in his
    She shivers
    As he pulls her close
    His mouth on her own
    She closes her eyes
    She is won

    Would love to know what you think

    i'm_not_neo likes this.
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

  3. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Great vocals and lyrics...loved the guitaring...nice.Yeah,the ending was nice too..reminded me of the intro of Punjab by Karunesh...sweet :)So I repeat: great work..

    Is it "she is won" or "she is one"???
  4. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    I totally agree with i'm_not_neo, great work, its a pleasant to listen to such a wonderful job, you did a wonderful job Fatima, keep posting!!!
    Great vocals as the guitaring was good too, is this song sooo short??
  5. Fatima

    Fatima Talent Unlimited <img src="images/smilies/worthy.g

    Thanks for sorting that out cryptic angel :)

    I'm not neo - it is "she is won" - as in by him. dunno if that makes sense lol

    and yeah it is quite short - its not really a conventional song in terms of verse, chorus, bridge etc - but then none of mine are heh.

    Thankyou so so much for listening and taking the time to comment :) Muchly appreciated!!
  6. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    tht was really nice one.ur voice sounded very sensual which added tht extra bit to the song coz of which it sounds more beautiful!!!!
    u girls r damn good. u and tht other girl arwa. really impressed!!!!
  7. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Pretty cool.

    Though I had something else in my mind, when I read the lyrics ( I hadn't heard your song till then)
  8. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Infact I would say - I didn't like the ending.
    The strings in the ending ... makes the song end on a morose note. (IMO).

    Almost like as if the girl didn't want it to happen, and is now reminiscing what she didn't really like.

    Its all IMO though.
  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    On second thoughts, the ending 'sounds' nice, but yeah, like alpha said, it doesn't really go with the lyrics.

    In fact, I could say that for the whole song :s

    I like both the melody/guitaring and the lyrics if considered seperately!

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