Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rockboyteek, Feb 17, 2005.

  1. rockboyteek

    rockboyteek New Member

    this is another poem from my english class

    i walked along the glistening sand
    it touched me gently, ever so softly.
    But then it seemed to scream as
    people ran and dug at it.
    The waves rolled in and forced the people away,
    guarding the sand as if they were very close friends.
    The sun watched beaming his heat down warming us up.
    The slowly he went to sleep making everyone cold.
    He left the sky dark and dull.
    The moon stared down aggresively like it was about ti attack us.
    The people walked away swiftly leaving deep footsteps in the hurt sand.
    There was no-one to gaurd the vunerable seaside,
    Things changed so much at the seaside.

    hope u like it
  2. shak

    shak Harrr!

    i'll say this again @rockboy..youRULE!!! ...lolzzz
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good work. Very nice imagery. I liked it. Keep it up!!
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Like dude, that's great man. You and your sister sure can write......keep it up, keep posting.
  5. Z^^^ that reminds me of the tsunami
    good writing rockboyteek
  6. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    :shock: tht rockd :)
  7. rockboyteek

    rockboyteek New Member

    now u think about it it does kind of remind u about tsunami

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