se hai

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Apr 14, 2009.

  1. Bus unn samjo app loog ki keval IGT ke liye post ki hai... thoda changes kar ke ;)
    i cant help posting here ..ajeeb dard ka rishta to hai ...!!

    Ajeeb dard ka rishta hai
    kabhi idhar se, to kabhi udhar se hai
    manjil kisi aur ko bana le re mann
    uss ka saaya, to kisi aur ke asar se hai

    gum nahin mujhko chale jaane ka
    dar to uss-ko, pahunchne vaali khabar se hai..

    koi to hogi majboori yaar uski bhi
    agarche dektha vo bhi to nazar se hai

    itni doori hogayi khaab main bhi aata nahin
    ghar to uss ka bhi, kuch hi door mere ghar se hai

    All comments welcomed !!
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ^ wah wah ...kyaa baat hai !!

    likte rahiye
     
  3. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Bahut khoob...!

    Aakhri sher khaas pasand aaya...!

    Yunhi likhte rahein

    :)
     
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    missed to comment this earlier..

    its too good.. great work
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ^ kyaa baat hai ...

    buut khoob......likte rahiye...simpy love the second stanza...!!
     

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