Jo baat chhupa ni thi wahi bata di mujhko, Zindagi tune bohot sakht saza di mujhko Kitni umeedo se badhaya tha kadam in raho per, tod kar un tawaqqo ko chur kar diya mujhko Yahi sila milta hai agar wafao ka, to ab se bawafa nahi hona mujhko Sabhi rishto ko dil se nibha kar kya paya hai dekho, har aashna ne sirf chashm e tar diya hai mujhko Kyu besabab hamesha sataya gaya mujhe, kyu sukun se kabhi nahi jiya diya mujhko Kya itna chubhti hu main apne apno ki aankho main, ke ek baar bhi gale se na lagaya gaya mujhko Bas ek karz dudh ka baaki hai es dil par, warna keh deti ke ab nahi jina mujhko Ye sawal hai mera har ek nazirin se mere, kyu mera haq kabhi na diya gaya mujhko Jo baat likhdi hai maine in kagaz par, uska jawab to khud rab bhi nahi de paya mujhko Haa zindagi tune bohot sakht saza di mujhko, es kamsini main hi duniya dikha di mujhko Nazirin --- > Readers Chashm e tar --- > Tears
simply wah.....hv u read guleri....vo "chandrakanta" vala....usne ek story likhi thi where a young boy keeps on asking a girl "teri kuramaaii ho gayi"= u got engaged....vo pehle jaldi shaadi hoja ti thi na.....so one day the girl says yes and story begins/ends whatever
this line is confusing..can u explain the meaning behind it? may be it shud be... yahi sila milta hai agar wafaaon ka.. to manjoor hai abb se bewafaa hona mujh ko.. btw nice poem dollie... but may be u can work on rhymes more..
Kamaal kar diya aapne.....maza aa gaya padh kar.....waise kissi ne dil to nahi toda hai aapka?....... anyways that's soooo.........well written.
Thnx alot anum ... :nw: Ek do zakham nahi sara badan hai zakhmi Dard Bechara Pareshaa hai kidhar se uthe ...
