Sawaali

Teri Chaukhat Pe Hai Mera Ye Sajda

Tujhe Jagaane Ke Liye

Ayaa Hoon Tera Dar Pe

Tera Saath Paane Ke Liye

Aaj Tak Maine Kuch Maanga Naa Thaa

Paaya Bhi Kuch Nahin Tujhse

Par Ab Yaqeen Hai Mujhe

Ke Too Sunega Meri Bhi

Maanaa Gunaah Maine Kiye

Par Nahin Hoon Alag Tere Jag Se

Main Bhi To Hunn Ek Sawaali

Maine Bhi Tujhse Maanga Hai

Tere Dar Kaa Hoon Bhikaari

 

the idea is banal !

 

what do you mean by banal

 

Shirdi waale, Saai baba,
Aaya hai tere, dar pe sawaali.

 

yaar the lyrics seems to be impressing to me


i dont know that why it is refused by viwers

or

they may not giving their valuable views

 

its not that bad.. the way others said.. its ok attempt..
but sure it lacks finesse..

 

Thanks Nimisha

 

don't worry dude... u'll improve... nice work !!!

 

thanks rich