vo ajj mere shaher to aaye par mujh se mile nahi.. shayad vaqt nahi tha.. bhuut sa kaam raha hoga so maine.. bache khuche vaqut ke tukade tukade kar dale aur faainke diye sadak pe kuch kaam isse bhi utha lenge kal tak subhe se sham tak ka to beech diya ye raat bhi bik jayegi.. bhuut jaldi kuch loogoon ki kabhi na khatam hone vaali bhookh khoob maze se jee le chand saal aur.. tera maans nooch nooch ke khaayenge main aur mera sakoon..
its really fabulous till te last two lines...somehow i found them bit mismatched to the rest of the poem's mood... But really powerful lines...reps, if i can..
the first verse was beautiful and the second verse was really really scary. I could picture you saying it with a dead serious soft voice and it sent a chill down my spine.