Safe n free

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by $cReWdR!veR, Jun 15, 2005.

  1. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    ...found it nice...not mine...nyways read on...

    I have scars I wish I didn't have,
    But the blood that trickled away,
    The blood you saw running from my arm,
    The blood you tried to stop,

    Made me feel good,
    And I laughed in your face and said that it wouldn't hurt,
    But I was wrong,
    It hurt and they scarred,
    but it made me feel good,
    And I was falling away from you,
    I was laughing you were crying,
    I was falling into the pool of blood,
    You reached for me,
    You kissed my face and asked,
    "what have you done?"
    And I replyed through my laughter,
    "escaped, escaped from this pain my dearest love can't you see? I am free"
    But you didn't understand,
    You placed your arms around my waist,
    And begged me not to go,
    You were full of blood,
    My blood,
    I carried on laughing,
    I knew I would be free,
    You carried on crying,
    You didn't understand,
    Laughing I reached for the pool of blood in front of me,
    And wrote on the walls with the red,
    "i am free now"
    You cried harder and I laughed harder,
    Because I knew I was going to be safe.
  2. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    Nice poem.....
  3. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    How Do You Write Such Stuff?????
    Teach Me!!!
  4. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Nice poem screw!

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