hi.. posting my poetry.. visited the temple bare footed prayed for your prosperity closed my eyes....to say HIM take my share of bliss and give it to my love visited the fortuneteller paid to know what is best for you and our future proclaimed my affection towards you appealed for trying to meet your parents and take the confirmed date of marriage i did not budge out..even they appeased me may be testing my feelings my emotions for you were not meant to explain.. how much i care for you with lovely smile on your cute face do one thing for me... u said only one just only one...... crucify yourself for the betterment of my paramour........ rohit astroguru26
this line just steals the show....... so again some 'PAIN' of the person loving someone from bottom of his heart n his love loving some1 else...
you are right Nimisha those lines does steal the show.. Very well wriiten Rohit and i would like to sat that: I pledge to you with all my heart In parchment I will write Forever you will be my lovely friend The one who shines great light Forever I will be with you The light to always guide To walk with you throughout our life Together side by side I love you my friend with my treasured heart The gift that I will give So you will know the promise of This beauty as we live......
i agree wit you sweetie.... seems u so much interested in rohit's poetries... u write beautifully.. if that was something u wrote.... plz keep posting in new threads...
The pain is quite evident. And beautifully expressed to the extent of writing the limits to which a person goes and does things just to get one's love. Though its a pity... life is not always a bed of roses !!