Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Jan 27, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member


    posting my poetry..

    visited the temple bare footed
    prayed for your prosperity
    closed my say HIM
    take my share of bliss and give it to my love

    visited the fortuneteller
    paid to know what is best for you
    and our future

    proclaimed my affection towards you
    appealed for trying to meet your parents
    and take the confirmed date of marriage
    i did not budge out..even they appeased me
    may be testing my feelings

    my emotions for you
    were not meant to explain..
    how much i care for you
    with lovely smile on your cute face
    do one thing for me... u said

    only one
    just only one......
    crucify yourself for the betterment of my paramour........

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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    this line just steals the show.......

    so again some 'PAIN' of the person loving someone from bottom of his heart n his love loving some1 else...
  3. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    :think: noone bothered to reply..........hmmmm

  4. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    you are right Nimisha those lines does steal the show..
    Very well wriiten Rohit and i would like to sat that:

    I pledge to you with all my heart
    In parchment I will write
    Forever you will be my lovely friend
    The one who shines great light
    Forever I will be with you
    The light to always guide
    To walk with you throughout our life
    Together side by side
    I love you my friend with my treasured heart
    The gift that I will give
    So you will know the promise of
    This beauty as we live......
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i agree wit you sweetie....
    seems u so much interested in rohit's poetries...
    u write beautifully.. if that was something u wrote....

    plz keep posting in new threads...
  6. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    The pain is quite evident. And beautifully expressed to the extent of writing the limits to which a person goes and does things just to get one's love.
    Though its a pity... life is not always a bed of roses !!

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