rules......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by uj_6string, Jan 16, 2006.

  1. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    rules.....
    the one who rules....make rules.....
    and other follow like a herd of sheep.....
    no brain of their own.....
    no voice of their own....
    they dont run....just drag their feet.....

    they are taught not to snore while sleeping....
    are taught not to laugh in public meetings.....
    are taught to never question......
    never ask....never reason.....

    so ppl go on....
    a shattered self esteem.....
    no individuality....no perspective.......
    no questioning......just respective......

    they are cowards.....
    never realize wht they are missing......
    so guys....if ur lisening....
    remember....
    uve gotta choice.....
    face the world......and let urself be heard.....
    learn to defy.....
    learn to deny....
    learn to question....
    learn to atleast try.....

    and if all; this makes no sense to you......
    i guess ur the one who abides wid the rulz.......

    comments plz!!
    uj:rock:
     
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  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    good work! ur gettin reps for this!
     
  3. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    very nicely done.... liked the idea! :)
     
  4. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    @cryptic angel....thankz a lot yaar.......and congratulations on reaching 600 posts:beer:.....
    @#iro.........thankz a lot yaar.......me really happy today:grin:
     
  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ^ well... may u always stay happy and keep smiling! :)
     
  6. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    ^^^thankz a lot!!!
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i was a little bird
    a bit cute, a bit shy
    but the rules of the cage
    i always deny

    no matter how i was decived
    i did what i belived
    was tied all alone
    as i tried to get released

    my beak was broken
    all around my feathers fly
    yes in their hands
    "like a fly i die"
    some thing of me goes up and cry
    see
    "i still support those who support the sky"

    this is how i express my idea ......u and me r on the same lines .........haha...i name it
    "choti chidia badi uddan"...saaala funny hai na
     
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  8. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    @uj: Well, i dont agree with the idea (the theme) but the execution was good IMO. Good work.
     
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Nice one..

    Hey thts a nice Eminem kinda stuff....try rap on it...it sounds awsome....i know i know we all rockers here...
     
  10. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    man.....madhuresh....awesome poem.....i remember we did a similar poem in hindi back in class 6.......chiriya ki aasha or something......
    @walk alone..thankz man...nah....i wont rap it........i'd rather translate it into hindi and then make a rock song:rock:
    @shsnawada-well....thankz....well....i wanted to add something to the poem.....wanted to conclude it by saying what i actually meant by "rules".....i am not saying that break your school rules and be a rebel or something.....i am not saying be undisciplined.......i am saying that get yourself heard......make your point....
    .look back at the history of india(history is my favourite subject).........all the guys dared to fight the rules.....they had progressive thoughts....way ahead of their times........
    examples are premchand......swami vivekananda.......ishwar chandra vidyasagar.....all of them.......
    but people were initially against most of them.....they thought that these people were trying to change the social order......but they turned out to be right in the end.......
    the majority may be against your view point........but it does not mean that u are wrong......yes it may mean that u are wrong but not necessarily......
    my friend once said"majority sometimes means that all the fools are on one side"
    uj:rock:
     

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