Rugged Love...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by idefixé03, Feb 22, 2009.

  1. idefixé03

    idefixé03 New Member

    your laughter’s like a gentle stream
    through my heart it flows
    takes away all the pain
    cleanses all my woes

    your eyes are like a kaleidoscope
    through them I can see
    all the shades of life around
    and a part of me

    your curls are like a shade of tree
    forever which will stay
    in them I would nestle
    akin to bird of prey

    your lips are like a wildflower
    longing for a zephyr’s kiss
    makes me let go of
    the splendor of the daffodils

    your slender arms are like liana
    bit by bit they’ll entangle me
    till a mellow slumber takes over
    your rugged love sets me free.
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I dint understand the last para......
    it means like your arms entangle me till I feel sleepy/dizzy, and then your (rugged) love sets me free.....
    wats tht supposed 2 mean?

    rest all is superbly poetic!
    hats off
     
  3. detritus

    detritus New Member

    That was really good, definitely one of the best ones i've come across here so far.

    Although 'rugged love' sorta reminds me of one of those corny romance novels with muscular men on the cover =P
     
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^u read 'em? watch p0rn instead: better
     
  5. detritus

    detritus New Member

    xD cheers mate, but i think id rather watch my girlfriend instead
     
  6. ^ substitue to nroP ...detritus's girl. she knw's ?
     
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^:D

    I wish I had 1(dneirflriG, hehe monica-trend).....so I'd fill up my PC wid meaningful stuff.....
    (jus kiddin', dont keep such stuff:::parents:::)



    @detritus
    jus cuz she's ur gal...jus watchin' wudnt help, I watch tens everyday.....man when wil I get 2 do something worthwhile
     
  8. detritus

    detritus New Member

    yeah, that would be what differentiates 'boyfriend' from 'stalker'

    @horse: when your mum decides to find you someone =P
     
  9. Do you really see some difference ... just try to go back when u didnt had her but only nroP ... can u detail a little, ( seriously ;P lets see what boyfriend see's...) ...u write poetry hope u will be truthfull !!
     
  10. detritus

    detritus New Member

    uhh.. what? =S
     
  11. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    I agree. I'd rather watch his girl too.





    wait, what?
     
  12. detritus

    detritus New Member

  13. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    hey if your girlfriend is older than 16, pedobear is defunct.
     
  14. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    hehe..
    words seemed 2 diminish...
    no need 2 say p0rn is heaven til a gal comes along
    ;P
     

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