Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Apr 20, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Title :- Rose
    well i know u got a rose
    their in ur garden
    u never made it, for us to meet
    but, this only makes it certain

    Hey, just tell it about some fairy land
    where their r other roses
    where the hymes of desires, sing their songs
    as the gate of disquiet closes
    u know it will not belive u
    and will play with its mind
    and if no heart,no innocence will it use
    only us it will find
    Look i'm seasoned, so may be not classy
    but waht i say, think u got through
    yes u of-couse big boss, Mr planner
    come-on, paly it and do
    that corner u take care off
    ya that, with a lot of woodbine
    Gardening is also innovative area
    if intrusts and care u combine
    u still have the habit of eating things
    and do u think petals r sweet
    soft delicious satisfying seductive
    logic say "u die if u dont eat"

    but,logic creates logic's for "the logic" to be killed
    reasons r just mass, cause empty vesssels shud be filled

    u told me or i told u this
    nevermind "leave it" then and their
    what was i saying ya leave it
    never let "it leave" some things must be clear

    see all in all, its just a rose
    one day it will go
    may be some one will pick it
    and he may pick and throw
    or a honey bee may suck its nector
    and make it all hollow
    if even not then, time my friend
    time's mite makes every item sorrow
    who better than u
    who better than u, know'

    i know, u subborn macho
    u'll smile and say "ur right !"
    u'll never do what all i intend
    u'll always keep things tight

    So no use seeing, through the glass doors
    whats inside and hidden
    so i dont say but still i know
    u got a rose their in ur garden

    Sanjay Mazumder and astroguru26 like this.
  2. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    ROSE is the name of somebody whom I LOVE.........

    Well, It's a wonderful poem............ I liked each and every line U wrote..... Gr8. REPS dude.......
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thanks.........did u notice the talk talk haha
  4. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ye truly acchi thi...
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Aree Nimisha bhi to kisi ke lea ROSE hai...... :p:
  8. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Dekh tujhe accha laga kyoon ki tu bhi kabhi yahi sooch chuka hai
    Now acchi thi ka kyaaa matlab
    bandi acchi thi ?
    poem acchi thi ?

    main puuch raha hoon iss ko kaisae pata ...vo bandi acchi thi....likhti hai sach muuuuuch achi bandi ki aadat pad gayi hai aisa likhne ki sab jagah likhti hai ...accha hai ....good
    na to theme accha hai
    na words
    na ye kehna ki main aisa soochta hoon
    saala mujhe to kori bakwaas lagi
    Phir isse accha laga kyaa ???:think:
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Mera ek friend hai ...we call him Bhola....vo kyaa karta tha na ....aaj koi ladki dekhi to ...2-3 days ke baad kehta tha....madhu tere ko vo bandi yaad hai .."vo jo parsoon, pani pee rahi thi jab hum cc ja rahe the".....haan to.....nahi aise hi YAAR ACCHIT THI (with his smile like that Macdonalds joker)
    .....USS ka Ek aur dilauge tha ....."HEY Bhagvaan abb dila de ya uthha le"
  10. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Aab to aapka comment achha hai............
  11. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    oyee isse kisi aur ne nahi padha kyaa ........?

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