rishtey.....

zindagi yunhi tabaah karte chale unke liye
jin nazaron se kabhi katl hua hamara kahin.
ek umra kaati un yaadon ki kasak mein.
bin jinke ek lamha ek pal bhi guzaara nahin.
humsafar ka ehsaas bhi khauff de jaata ab to,
deewangi bhi unhein hamara gawaara nahin
kyun har ghum bebas sa kar jaata aye khuda,
humdum bhi ab is pal mein hamara nahin.





any comments..


rohit
astroguru26

 

nice one ..astro ..

 

thanks nimit for appreciating...

my words in hindi poem are very less and limited....however i tried what i have in my stock...lol



rohit
astroguru26

 

humsafar ka ehsaas bhi khauff de jaata ab to,

kya baat hai ji....

 

nice 1!...mera dil ka haal bayaan kar diya...lolz

 

in lavzon mein tune aaj kar hi diya bayan mere yaar...
koi kuch bhi kahe par hum kahenge Rohit ko ho gaya hai pyaar..

 

WAH WAH... bro yaar ap tu CHA GAYE HAIN... very well said!

@ astro... WELL DONE MAN! :beer: