Rhyme

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by loyal, Jan 10, 2007.

  1. loyal

    loyal New Member

    Hi folks,

    This is my first post in this forum, i decided to write a rhyme in dedication to this wonderful instrument that we all love to play.

    It is still in alpha quality, your suggestions/comments are welcome.


    My Tryst

    Every time i look at you,
    you make me skip a beat or two.
    The pleasure and satisfaction that you provide day and day
    are more than what mere words can say.

    You are so versatile and satiate our diverse tastes
    from classic flamenco to extreme shreds
    The flawless bends and trills that u render
    have struck me in awesome wonder.

    You accompany my crooning with such grace and charm
    like a faithful friend who does no harm.
    You fill the hearts of millions with gladness
    and soothe our pains with your melodic goodness.

    Oh!, my love what a companion you have been
    you possess qualities that are hard to be seen.
    In you i trust, my love with whole heart
    until death do us apart.
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good ....!...reps added
     
  3. how sweet ....very good buddy
     
  4. zicky5608

    zicky5608 Power Shortage

    Man this is cooool !! Very nice work dude.
     
  5. loyal

    loyal New Member

    Thankx Guys !!...
     
  6. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Nice. I would have liked it even better if it were a love song and not a tryst to the guitar.
     
  7. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    dat was kool! :)
     

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