Rest In Peace...........(hey i am back.........)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by idefixe, Mar 16, 2006.

  1. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    All of our lives we’ve been so busy
    Livin life was never easy
    In pursuit of things that would never stay
    You gotta learn from kings of yesterday
    So rest in peace shall we now
    Its time for us to find a higher ground
    Rest in peace the only true
    Rest in peace you have to

    All of our lives we’ve been so greedy
    Pilin up all the things meant for needy
    Lockin up in chambers all the gold
    Keeping it that way until we’re old
    So use the keys shall we now
    It was always out there can u hear the sound
    Rest in peace shall we now
    Its time for us to find a higher ground
    Rest in peace the only true
    Rest in peace you have to

    No more infatuation
    Mindless obligation
    Feel like I am going down
    But there’s an explanation
    To everythin that’s happenin
    All Ur life in shambles
    How can we seeee………

    All of our lives we’ve been so busy
    Livin life was never easy
    In pursuit of things that would never stay
    You gotta learn from kings of yesterday
    So rest in peace shall we now
    Its time for us to find a higher ground
    Rest in peace the only true
    Rest in peace you to
     
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  2. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Great one dude!!!
    Shall make super duper hit song....!!!
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    rytly said....

    good work....
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one.....
     
  5. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    Not a good comeback. old concept "rest in peace".

    better comeback expected. but no heart feelings..k ;)

    :beer:
    sachoo
     
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    I can never write lyrics, only poems (ah, well, not even that now) but u do a wonderful job of it!

    Do you make them into complete songs? If you do, I'd love to listen to them..
     
  7. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Hey thanks guys.............for your support and appreciation..........all your comments do make difference.....................!
    hey good 2 hear from u sharome and crptic angel.........and yes these lyrics will certaainly make a good song,but i cant compose........i just have kind of tunes in my mind...........so guys u are welcome to compose my lyrics............knight guitar are you listening....?



    bhaskar
     
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Nice one dude.......as said would be a great song.
     
  9. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    amazing! :rock:
     
  10. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Mwahahahhaaa.. I think u should give up all hopes of knight_guitar helping u out.

    P.S. No offence intended.
     
  11. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Mwahahahhaaa..I feel the same too...........where the hell is he.....not 2 be seen for a long time...........lol

    And hey crptic thanx for the comments.............btw why is is the poetess resting in peace........u should now stop writing poetry.........maybe u wanna write songs like me...lol

    u must keep the passion alive...........though peotry doesn't pay.......a lot of times.......i think u just need a break.

    As the poetess needs a break,
    She rests in peace
    I know She'll be back again
    With a beautiful piece..............

    bye and have funnnnnnnnn................
     
  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Nice lyrics..
    lookin forward to hear the song..
    put it up once ur done with it:)

    will check ur other work too..i jus realised i havent read the previous poems:eek::
     
  13. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Hey thanx Bubbly Martini...............really appreciate ur comments.........but i just have the lyrics..........cant compose it.........!

    Just see if someone can do that.......I'll really look forward 2 a song made out of these lyrics.........and hey do read other work too.....you will sure like it I guess..........lol

    Bye and take care..........
     

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