remembrance

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by browneyegurlie, Feb 27, 2006.

  1. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    The vision in my eyes,
    The words on my lips,
    remember you,
    only you.

    Everything so sober,
    nothing like the world once begun.
    Split personality, split dreams.
    All the signs of insanity.

    Razor roads define the pathway,
    to you.
    Broken or tattered,
    the efforts lie.

    Can you not see this?
    Living in your black box,
    blocking all the desires,
    the flames that once rose.

    Ashes remain,
    burnt fingers, blistered.
    Angry the sparks jump,
    only to disappear-gone.

    Moving further away,
    the walk seems backward,
    the speech far from reality.
    Just for once let me in.
     
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  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    My darling back on the forums again, mmwah sweetheart! I know what this is about, so makes more sense to me, i draw inspiration from you as ever, excellent effort :grin:
     
  3. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    hey.. :)
    its been a lonng lonnnng time :)
    nice poem ;)

    Moving further away,
    the walk seems backward,
    the speech far from reality.
    Just for once let me in.
    ....

    nice 1. :>
     
  4. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    well written!!!
    :beer:
     
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Its surely been a Long Time..
    I missed you..*hug*
    even though there are so many girls for company its different with you :eek::

    Nice poem dear..
    Take care!
     
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    there u go girl...awsome poem.....as good as u r.
     
  7. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    thank you *blushes*, at bubbly...its nice to be back...missed you too :)
     
  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    return in style...love that!!!
     
  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Loved it... you're an amazing poetess :)
     

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