Reign of Appearance

^^^^^awwwwwwwww......

 

thanks...the first person to actually like this..

 

^^^ur welcome
:beer:

 

hey plz temme whats this about.....i know its sumthing abt man n machine as shsnawada said! i wanna know further more!

ok ok ok i know! Cryptu doesnt know anythign....shes blabbering....if she knows she would tell us!..muahahahahaha!:grin:

anywayz@cryptic - plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!

 

Thats what i said. its very much a sad truth thing which pisses me off. Its very much human... Those bitches!!!

 

NOOOOOOOOOOOO :

 

@bjr: people could fit this into music so i dont think that this poem would be too difficult to fit in....

By the way this was one of my influences :grin: most probably the biggest one....

 

Ok. here's the cmplete version. the added bit might make a bit more sense:

I enter the unidimensional abyss,
Visual synthesis, venomous confinement;
No feel, no past, no heart,
Just the eyes you a s s h o l e

Shedding out thousands for
Brain-dead embellishers,
To enhance the sense that survives tedious tortures
While other dimensions cling onto our sterile hopes

Two one-dimensional machines clash for the cause
Look back when the primal instincts slip back again
Morality gives way,
Look, when ego conquers

The sources attract to
Soul-less outdoor machines
Instincts causeless, humanity disabled,
Monotonous venom rides sky rockets in reverse

Windows of hope stay far, this bouncing bottomless pit
Arrest the hopes when ego conquers the throne
Lost by morality
Short term successes win!!

 

:nw: i'm bored of my style of writing n i'm jst lovin urs :nw:

 

Thanks :beer:
That is ofcourse when it makes sense... Did it? I mean the second bit.

 

:shock:

it was gud

 

Information leaked?? :shock:

 

yeah.. i think i did that :

 

Thanks for doing that. Its nice that its more than a mere conversation between thew two of us

 

Es was sehr gut dude ...

how does it matter whether the info was leaked aber sealed ...

 

Erm...sorry for bumping an old thread. But just wanted to say what this poem is really about. (realizing that there's no point of no one understands it
This poem is about people (IMO) who care too much about their looks. Fashion, bimboism....etc.
Hope you get it now!!! :beer: (the poem is actually on post 28, post 1 is incomplete)

 

man i just love this poem