Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by shashankgothic, Jun 30, 2009.

  1. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    Pond, lonely moonlight reflecting from it,
    I look how the wind is altering the surface...

    Figures of moonlight shiveringly playing in the pond,
    glittering, modifying, multiplying, imitating life...

    Group of reflections in the surface,
    raging wildly, spinning and swinging...

    One lonely spot of light, far away from others,
    quivering forgottenly, slowly dying away...
  2. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    yes i like imagery......
    so its good ..........but u can add more to it!

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