Raped....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, May 1, 2006.

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  1. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    no no no... u got me wrong. It's about my poor grammar n not urs.. LOL.

    anyways but i dont want to discuss poem anymore. As said earlier, it is good n with feelings.
     
  2. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    did i mentioned specifically in the quote tht it is only about women enjoying? can't a woman rape a man n he enjoying it when it's inevitable? n wud be more than obliged if u can explain how it concludes disrepecting women.
     
  3. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    Dont thank me man...Its your hard work(no pun intended), you earned it all by yourself...maan:cool: ..

    the number of posts in this thread validates that statement
     
  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Oh yea!!...I know where u r coming from....ur words are all full of shit just like you dude...better get urself checked before you lose it completely.

    Nimisha: Iam sorry for this^^ but few people wd believe anyone for a nickle,even if they have hardly interracted with them ever.

     
  5. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    :RollLol:
    free pantyhose to all...sweaty monkeyballs up for grabs...call me...​
     
  6. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    @ walk_alone_so_i_can_be_p-philic
    where am i coming from??
     
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    see even u dnt know...check ur ass(0) dude .... and stuff it if u still are wondering.

     
  8. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Yep, youre the most mature/experienced guy in this forum. Philosophical thoughts of that kind left my brain rendering for hours.

    Because of those words, i wonder why youre 25 when only people with great experience (50+ but in a good way) talk like that.

    Back to the topic.
    Erm, i think the point was for us to comprehend the pain, trauma...etc right? I still think writing in third person could suit this better.
     
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    i know its bad to talk like that...but some people(irrespective of their age) only understand this language.
    No offence meant to any other person.
    I wdnt spam this thread now..iam off this thread.

     
  10. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    That was just stupid. You know what I meant so no need to start an argument about it. It's disrespectful to a rape victim, alright? Ya happy now?

    Loser.
    I dont think those who disliked the poem felt so coz of her english. Her english is fine and as for the grammar mistakes she sometimes makes, that's not really a problem as it can be easily corrected.
    ***** STATIC*****.

    Sorry (not to walk_alone) I couldnt keep shut. Mods/FL can edit this post as they wish.
     
  11. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    true.. no1 can evr kno or feel wot a raped victim has to go through..
    the helplessness, anger, trauma of that person cant be xprssd in a poem..
    its like a scar they hav 2 bear 4 d rest of thr life due 2 no fault of thr own.
    very few ppl can be thr own self agn n thnk positively aftr tht, thnx 2 our society.
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    @nimisha.. nice try,
    but i dont blame u if ur poem failed 2 do justice 2 d emotions of a the raped victim, tht wud require a real masterpiece.
    but nevertheless kudos 2 u 4 chosin such a snsitive topic n atlst tryin 2 pull it off. the effrt m8rs.
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    havin said tht, i also agree wid cryptic_angel.
    true.
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    true. and so does IGT.
    its not jst bt dis thrd dude.
    take in2 account ny chitcht thrd and u wud find as mny replies. the fact is IGT thrives a lot on the chitchat thrds, u stop the chitchat forum and IGT is dead. try it n u'l kno. IGT lacks quality guitarists now 2 keep it runnin at d same pace widout d help of the chit chat forum.
    P.S. i kno its a poetry n lyrics forum but it mite as well be in chitchat.
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    thts gonna be the last thing on ur mind when u r on the receivin end. :|
    i can bet my life's earning on tht. :|

    but u win some points 4 tryin 2 think positive, hehe.
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    a lil bit offtopic,
    altho oftopic is ontopic in IGT :)
    no fun kilin the same horse agn n agn.
    let walk_alone walk alone. al u peeps get off his bck 1 by 1 :grin:

    @walk alone. gav u some points.
    change ur title man n stop cribbin bt y n how some1 chngd urs, & ya..

    if u mess wid Doctor's (Dr Saurabh) title 4 revenge, do it at ur own risk.. he got lotsa points, he can change his n urs a million times :)
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    jst my 2 cents.
    erm.. no... this post is 2 big 4 2 cents.
    mebe jst my 1 $ :grin:
     
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  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Mera kyaa mana hai na ki ....jo karna hai karo magar "mard" ki tarah .... jo bitch type ho usse bajaoo ... aisa jhooth-vooth bool ke nahi ...
     
  13. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    if u r tryin 2 talk like a retard thn u r doin a good job.
    if u r not (which means u are realy a retard ), thn chng dat avvy of urs. its way 2 innocent 4 a post as d one abv.

    if u got my point u did a good job.
    if u did not (coz u mite be a retard ), thn agn chng dat avvy of urs. its way 2 innocent 4 a post as d one abv.

    the loop goes on n on n on..
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    'mard ki tarah' my a$$!
     
  14. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Dear Nimisha,

    I prefer a reply to my post in the case things are being directed to everyone
    there is a possibility of anyone being offended by what you say
    I prefer to get a reply to my views, you cant make others feel they were in some way agreeing to what i say..
    Most importantly you cant brand everyone as emotionless..
    fine..the poem did not make everyone like it...not many went numb

    Many people do Respect women for christs sake!

    You cant make a division between people who criticised and people who praised,hope you know what criticism is!
    and Nimisha!..i thought you'd appreciate honesty!?
    i'm not trying to prove myself right here
    but do think before making any statements
    i know its a hard topic and even i may not be able to write on it
    you being blunt in your replies (not the poem) doesnt justify anything

    Yours Truly,
    Martina aka Bubblymartini.


    PS-Sorry if that came across as blunt rude or anything of that sort,

    @Zoom- i'm disappointed.
    What did you mean by being liberal?
    and again...Please dont direct your views to everyone..

    Looking at the whole thread!
    Sadly,the thought of rape looks raped now..

    theres a whole lot to rape than this,
    people may fall short of words when it comes to explaining certain things
    its fine if you cant redo the poem Nimisha,
    jus gave you a bit of my honesty, didnt know you'd decipher it this way.
    i did say Leave It if you dont agree!

    Note: what i say or write are my views..
    No one is obliged to agree or disagree with anyone's view,
    but yeah you may respond to it if you want to!
     
  15. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    But I agree!

    Well said. I wanted to say smthng similar but u beat me to it :grin:
     
  16. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh


    abhi sab apni baat keh rahe hain ......jo mere dimak main aaya maine kaha......main jhooth kuun boluun (hykned concepts like raddi contracepts)....VO PHOTU BHI MERA HAI AUR VICHAAR BHI MERA....and mard ki tarah is ur ass....dear if ur a man ur ass will be like a man...haha
     
  17. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Hey subhro,
    thxs for points...i dont need it...maybe doctor wd get happy luking at my title...afterall thts wat he wanted to be.

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    @walk alone. gav u some points.
    change ur title man n stop cribbin bt y n how some1 chngd urs, & ya..

    if u mess wid Doctor's (Dr Saurabh) title 4 revenge, do it at ur own risk.. he got lotsa points, he can change his n urs a million times :)
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    jst my 2 cents.
    erm.. no... this post is 2 big 4 2 cents.
    mebe jst my 1 $ :grin:[/QUOTE]
     
  18. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    Oh sure dude, only diff wud be tht the dispatcher at my end wud be prettiest girl and at u wud get the best stud on earth (so better save rather earning) n u wud become a super man, hehehehe... :RollLol:

    see m again positive n never a loser :p:
     
  19. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    dekho dekho ab na karo hum pe yeh sitam .... tumko hain kasam ... jaan meri jaa rahi sanam ... hehehehehehe .. ummmmmuwha ..

    :( :( :( :(

    maine toh aise he bola tha .... like thought of the day ....

    waise i nvr took this poem to be related as a real life story or wateva.. BOLTED... has anyone seen "girl next door" ???
     
  20. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    @sachoo.. heh, i nvr talkd bt njoyin it dude. i aint tht mch +ve. ;-). u hav fun.
     
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