Random thoughts (prose in a poetic style)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by d_ist_urb_ed, Mar 3, 2007.

  1. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    1)When i look to the sky i see
    A rainbow so tinted by crimson
    It begins to glow brighter and brighter
    Till i can see no more...


    2)Faint recollection of the visceral pain
    Hark
    My blood spills;
    I turn around to meet his scythe
    A glimmer in the moonlit night
    I die


    3)Gateway to the void
    Door to the known unknown
    Window through which when i see
    I see tortured souls
    Not unlike me


    *shrug*
     
  2. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    and you stopped talking to me on yahoo because...?
     
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    My computer froze for a while and all hell broke loose. I'm back on now.
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    1)When i look to the sky i see
    A rainbow so tinted by crimson
    It begins to glow brighter and brighter
    Till i can see no more...

    this was good ...

    i cant say anything abt the others ....jane kyaa sooch hai ..well jo bhi ho !
     
  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED


    ^this one got me thinking...



    oh n i logged on after like 10 days... SEE I TOOK UR ADVICE and stopped logging on for a while! oh haan mera computer bhi kharab tha since like 4 days! *smiles* hehe
     
  6. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Gateway to the void
    Door to the known unknown
    Window through which when i see
    I see tortured souls
    Not unlike me




    You wrote a verse about Yahoo Messenger?



    you're swell :')
     

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