I was very tempted to post a poem here..unfortunately I can't come up with new poems so I thought I'd post some old ones from my blog at IGT.. This one is RoA written in 2 parts and I hope its good...though not one of my favourites I really wanted to post something here Rage Of Angels You left me With more than just a broken heart I said nothing then I let the tears drown in the ocean the darkness has spread since then into the depths of my heart I've been scarred by the rage of angels This soul no longer loves and its all for vengeance..of your betrayal What I've become is something beyond hatred love for me is like an eternal deathbed But I won't let your memories haunt my days Even then I wished you a goodbye with all my heart But I now know true love is too good to last A darker me embraces this fact As I let go the shadows of my past... Rage of Angels: Aftermath This darkened heart has been forged in hatred this hug has lost its warmth and sensitivity is almost dead. I don't blame you.. I actually smile a smile of wicked mirth.. and thank you deep inside for this rebirth. The irony of this world.. Now there's a girl crying in front of me A place where I used to be. I don't care even the slightest Love comes and goes just like the river..that steadily flows.. She keeps weeping..barely able to speak.. And all thats audible is a "Why?" The simplicity of the word Shatters my world I've turned myself into what I despited once And I realized that my first love Was like a forbidden curse that was cast.. And I would forever be in the darkness Of the shadows of my past..
*speechless* u DIDNT like this poem?!!!!! i mean it wasnt one of ur fav?!!!! :shock: *bangs her head in the wall* the second part of this poem was :nw: and SINCE u luv ppl prasing u (everyones does) so i'll just tell u YET again k u rite reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy well! i think i'll stop riting from now on cause ma poems seem so WEIRD wid wat u/everyone rites...:
Yeah well you know I didn't like it as a poem..its very fact like esp. part 1...plus it was on a slightly darker note.but looking at you comment,I'm reconsidering it now!! Bangs her head??lmao.... Ooh..thanks a lot..yeah..the poem isn''t that good without part 2!! Yes I love people praising me : hahaha... Thanks a lot..reallyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!! Whoa??!!You should know your writings are really inspiring..and I'm not just saying that...and they're definitely NOT WEIRD:shock: :dance:
i liked the second part.. but if the lines r true.. i will just say dat.. some ppl don't deserve the love we keep im our hearts for them.. the tears.. the feelings r all void.. better not 2 waste them on those ppl.. life is beautiful..
i dont understand ... u mix the genders ...u seem to be a girl some times..many times then aftermath....care to explain ?
That isn't a word. Maybe you meant 'despised' or 'detested' As for the poems, well written, but I'm too bored of such themes so.. meh.
@cryptic_angel: hahaha..yeah thats despised...lol..sorry... Hmmm..yeah,I have become monotonous for a while...and I can imagine this theme being already used many times..I did feel that Aftermath was a bit different but then maybe you read a lot of poems or maybe the theme is indeed typical....I definitely must thank you for reading...at least it was well written... @madhuresh : haha..no I just sound like a girl at times ...it was written from a male point of view..I must ask though..can you specify the lines where you found gender confusion???Maybe you assumed pt.1 to be a girl and hence you got confused... @Bish...so much for anonymity eh??? No..this is definitely not my love story...purely fictional...
