Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Apr 18, 2006.

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  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Title:- Q

    was in Q
    jaane Qu
    wanted to pee
    but kyaa karuun

    Q was long
    so i sang song
    pass nahi koi
    hona lu lu

    got dipressed
    when Q compressed
    "life is long,
    desires be supressed"

    then realised
    two big sized
    pressing from back
    what a surprise

    oh ! even in front
    their's a nice bump
    tight jeans teenager
    no reason to confront

    on back i feel the circles
    front, hv my lips above her neck
    but tight ballon's, can burst any time
    [beep], what the heck !

    u know dear the funda is clear
    will have pressure when things r near
    so keep pushing in front
    enjoys wahts all on back
    systems r very flexible
    they will never crack
    i just ask one thing to god
    thy tell me right and true
    itna gud luck par
    itna bad "timing" Q
  2. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    starting was good with okay ending n bad use of words made it disappointing. Ironically, shud write something touching other than humour. :beer:
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Please dont post your poems with such obscene and explicit content. Im closing this thread.

    If Nimisha finds my closing unjustified then she can re-open it.
  4. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    @sachoo...now do u still find my post in some thread about this chap inappropriate. werent you the one who went ahead and created a thread supporting him.
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i totally agree with vini...
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