Dil mera tadapne laga,Pyaar to nahi kahin yeh pyaar to nahi. Khayalo mein tere khone laga, Pyaar to nahi kahin yeh pyaar hto nahi Neend naih En aankhon mein bas tera hi khayal hai Chayi hai kaisi yeh khumari , Saanso mein teri hi khusboo hai Khwaab tere mein pirone laga, Pyaar to nahi kahin yeh pyaar to nahi Well, this is the first composition of mine..and sooner its goin to be a soft romantic song. as i have already made the rhythm and now working on chords...
hey, for ur first thing this was very good ....keep posting and try using some new words and thoughts ...good going