Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tejas, Dec 30, 2004.

  1. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Mother, you grant us shelter,
    Warmth, you sustain all life
    Serene, blissful splendor
    Overwhelming affection

    Chaperon, hold us fragile
    Replenish, all our needs
    Traces, worth no mention
    Still blessed with your grace

    When nothing is expected in return
    Things, we take for granted
    Coveting, for everything and more
    Gratitude, is lost along the way

    Negligent, doing wrong without damaging intent
    Even more so, to worry about the chastisement

    Forgive the loss of thankfulness
    But re-offending is not tolerable
    The hand that rocks our cradle
    Has been overcome by numbness of hurt

    Rising within is the spirit of revolt
    A voice that refuses to lie down and take it
    No matter who brought about this ache
    Rightly so, is to them punishment due

    Still no wind of what’s to come
    We wander on, through dusk and dawn
    When suddenly darkness falls,
    Winds blow hard and strike us down
    Clouds turn dark and then a violent spill
    But no shade of water spilt, only deep red
    As death calls on us, we take a final breath
    And question mother nature if she feels regret

    “For we - thy children, meant no harm,
    Guilty of recklessness and ignorance
    Enlightenment we sought you to provide
    Enlightened indeed, but to your pitiless splendor
    Mercy and pardon we cried for but received none
    And now as you watch, we all die as one
    All as a lesson you meant, but killing is no moral
    Suffering for no cause, punishment undue

    Copyright ©2004 Tejas

    There it is. I trust all of u understood what its about. I first called it "Tsunami" but i thought that made things quite obvious. So changed it. Hope u like it.
  2. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    whoa tejas?? u are turning out to be a nice poet.. nice one dude
  3. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    very good indeed tejas , i think this tsunami has affected a lot of hearts i guess , very good composition !! am much impressed !!
  4. drunken_wisdom

    drunken_wisdom WiSeCrAcKeR

    hello tejas...thats a really good one..:)
  5. drunken_wisdom

    drunken_wisdom WiSeCrAcKeR

    that was really really neat...i feel even worse when i plan on partyin on new years eve.hey tejas...u r damn talented...like bro said..
  6. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Moderators are seldom wrong:p: Anyways, tejas, another amazing poem to add to your tally dude, really nice. We miss Essi, but you seem to be compensating his absence to an extent.
  7. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    good one, dude... keep rockin'
  8. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    nice tejas...dude, how come u never told me dat u write...damn, u good....
  9. Natasia

    Natasia ...

    awwssomeee peice of writing tej....gr88 going...u put wat most of us feel down in words..... reallllyyy touching......
  10. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Thanks a lot to all of you. Glad you liked it. Lets hope this new year will be devoid of any other such perils.
  11. skaw

    skaw snooze

    k u r a poet ... i dont need to add anything else
  12. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    I've no words to praise your poem tejas. It's really fantastic.....
  13. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Thanks guys. Im really flattered u like it so much.
  14. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Hey, when are U bringing out your next poem?
  15. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    @tejas.........good one man...ur a natural man.awesome work
  16. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Thanks DrSaurabh. And Sanjay - I dunno. Right now i got exams going on, so no time to write. But once they are over, i'll post another one.
  17. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Best of luck for your Exams..... And we'll be waiting..........

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