Post Love...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rock all, Mar 5, 2006.

  1. rock all

    rock all New Member

    My life is full of of doom
    Like stale air in a dark room

    My mind has now gone astray
    And my emotions have a different game to play

    The rigidness of my body belies the restlessnes of my soul
    More of a bleeding stump than an erect pole

    I try to free myself from this treachorous cage
    Please end this chapter on this line on this page

    Love was an enigma until I stumbled on it
    Now its turning into a ditch than a sweet flowered pit

    Why should you love someone and not get it in return
    Why is it that when you see him with someone its your heart that burns

    They say love is powerful and I feel they are not being fair
    Cause when you try to hurt your loved ones back you fear that they might not even care.

    (my friend had given me this poem i think its nice)
     
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Loved it.. your friend wrote it?
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wow nice good mast..
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hey this browser show's "mydoom" when ever i put the cursor on that word doom.......
    The rigidness of my body belies the restlessnes of my soul
    More of a bleeding stump than an erect pole

    ur friend is a m/f ?? ;-D
     
  5. rock all

    rock all New Member

    she is a female
     
  6. rock all

    rock all New Member

    hey nice to know u liked it ...my friend said she wrote it tho..
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    kudi nu keh de eethe aajaye....!
     
  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    "They say love is powerful and I feel they are not being fair
    Cause when you try to hurt your loved ones back you fear that they might not even care."


    loved these lines dude/dudette
    thanks for sharing the poem..
     
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Loved these lines. So true.
    Nice poem... really liked the flow of words and emotions. :)
     

Share This Page