poems and poetic thoughts....

my poetic thought :

girls are always lost in a dream world
where they see true love
guys always see the reality
thats why we hate the word conjugality
girls are dumb but not as dumb
guys are the ones who never feel really numb

lolz i jus wrote it as i went along ... hope my targets acquire my attack

 

dude your are messed up, have you been smoking again :annoyed:

 

@ Menon I like ur way of writing.. it is very deep & rich.. but u know I noticed that large amount of people don’t like to read deep thoughts.. that’s why I always try to post simple and abbreviated thoughts here.. and I keep my deep thoughts for only people who contemplate.. hope to see more from you..

 

Hasty thoughts.. don’t play with poets..
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I didn’t say true love exits or existed..
I didn’t dream like love thread u had started..!

Reality for guys.. kiss, hug and xxx..
That’s why nowadays love needs a fix

Guys skinned from love the feeling..
Said reality.. which has a different meaning.. !

conjugality is the word that brought u..
Without it .. thank God, we won’t see like u..

 

@ menon...

Beautiful...

Very nice... loved that part... the lack of meter works fabulously...

 

@ skaw... your passages are much better...
@ reem... nice use of rhythm...

 

gosh menon ur post was excellant.. waiting for many more as such from u....
gr8 work guys

 

Thanx for the Kudos yall..I've written some pretty intense stuff man..I mean the kind you read and take a look back down and say, "Ayyyy..I've been there..I hear you!" Half of it I can't find, the other half I might've to type down from Hard Copy..
Jus something I do when I feel I need to..I'll come up with something in a day o two..So Til Then, you guys keep goin
Cheerio
Menon

 

lolz , nice reem ... i was goin to come bak but then 'respect for elders' ... you noe how it goes ...

essi , atleast i am gud at sumthin .. n plus i dun like poetry dat much either , except for stuff that i understand .. like menon's went over my head ...

menon , since everyone likes ur post ... i too will appriciate it .. ... gud job

sonali , sorry hun but i only smoke weed wid 'you' once just cause you insisted (i can always have an arguement wid you can't i ... grandma)

 

Frisky Four Leggeds, Grim Undertakers
Sweepin Flowers off a Wagon of Death,
"Pox on you""Get Movin'"Whatta you waitin for?"
Surely it's the Demise of my Health
Half Hearted Hoardes and Road Signs Askew
Orange Zest evenings offset by Rich Blue Sky
If any one professes His Existence, I wonder why

Jus Something I tht of today..write in guys..I'd like to knw what you guys think!!
Cheerio
Menon

 

Ok!! I think its time we have dedicated forum for just Poem's, what do you think?

 

thats what i meant you moron.....i was askin if you were smoking by yourself....you know you should share.....what the F#$^ do you mean by grandma.....

 

was that a poem (the first one) or just a frustrated outburst ?

 

@ menon... hmm... i don't really understand what you're trying to say... sounds like an driver getting irritated by animals blocking the road... but the last sentence beats me... care to explain?

@ neo, great idea...

@skaw, well, nobody got anywhere high on the ladder without beginning from the bottom...

 

i think its a nice idea with so many poets around here

 

Hehehe...
That was jus something that came to me man..wanted to make it sound all philosohical n all..guess it didn't work eh?
Neva mind..yall, I'll come up with somethin else..
Cheerio
Menon

 

Final Chapter...

Forgive me for what I knew not was wrong
Blame me not for my ignorance
You shared the hope I did have once
But now it seems I was mistaken all along.
And yet it seems you and I were there
Winning, gaining and leading the way
Little did I know, you and I never were...
Two beings separated, as night and day.

You followed me though I wished not to lead
You followed me though I wished so to leave

Blame me not, for I did not forget
Blame me not, for it aint too late

I am but a tool of a greater design
I am but a mortal, I will yet die...

And in haste we forgot what we knew from birth
In haste we forgot the truth of ash and dust

Together with thee, I swear my hardest I'll try
Yet together with thee, I am but alive...

(23rd November 2004)

 

wow, that would be great but don't you think zoommie deserves a break, he's done so much in the last few days........i mean smilies, bangali tabs forum, igt photo album, poor guy.......

 

Zoom, is a superman!

 

damn, i was so confused, i was writeing a reply in the chit chat forum and all of a sudden i was in a new forum, what the heck was that, and yea i know he's superman.....you're helping him out thought right....hehe, such a good boss