poems and poetic thoughts....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sonali, Sep 15, 2004.

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  1. skaw

    skaw snooze

    my poetic thought :

    girls are always lost in a dream world
    where they see true love
    guys always see the reality
    thats why we hate the word conjugality
    girls are dumb but not as dumb
    guys are the ones who never feel really numb

    lolz i jus wrote it as i went along ... hope my targets acquire my attack
  2. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    dude your are messed up, have you been smoking again :annoyed:
  3. Reem

    Reem Banned

    @ Menon I like ur way of writing.. it is very deep & rich.. but u know I noticed that large amount of people don’t like to read deep thoughts.. that’s why I always try to post simple and abbreviated thoughts here.. and I keep my deep thoughts for only people who contemplate.. hope to see more from you..
  4. Reem

    Reem Banned

    Hasty thoughts.. don’t play with poets..
    I didn’t say true love exits or existed..
    I didn’t dream like love thread u had started..!

    Reality for guys.. kiss, hug and xxx..
    That’s why nowadays love needs a fix

    Guys skinned from love the feeling..
    Said reality.. which has a different meaning.. !

    conjugality is the word that brought u..
    Without it .. thank God, we won’t see like u..
  5. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    @ menon...


    Very nice... loved that part... the lack of meter works fabulously...
  6. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    @ skaw... your passages are much better... ;)
    @ reem... nice use of rhythm...
  7. gautam_njoy

    gautam_njoy New Member

    gosh menon ur post was excellant.. waiting for many more as such from u....
    gr8 work guys
  8. Menon

    Menon New Member

    Thanx for the Kudos yall..I've written some pretty intense stuff man..I mean the kind you read and take a look back down and say, "Ayyyy..I've been there..I hear you!" Half of it I can't find, the other half I might've to type down from Hard Copy..
    Jus something I do when I feel I need to..I'll come up with something in a day o two..So Til Then, you guys keep goin
  9. skaw

    skaw snooze

    lolz , nice reem ... i was goin to come bak but then 'respect for elders' ... you noe how it goes ...

    essi , atleast i am gud at sumthin :) .. n plus i dun like poetry dat much either , except for stuff that i understand .. like menon's went over my head ... :eek:

    menon , since everyone likes ur post ... i too will appriciate it .. :p ... gud job

    sonali , sorry hun but i only smoke weed wid 'you' once just cause you insisted (i can always have an arguement wid you can't i ... grandma)
  10. Menon

    Menon New Member

    Frisky Four Leggeds, Grim Undertakers
    Sweepin Flowers off a Wagon of Death,
    "Pox on you""Get Movin'"Whatta you waitin for?"
    Surely it's the Demise of my Health
    Half Hearted Hoardes and Road Signs Askew
    Orange Zest evenings offset by Rich Blue Sky
    If any one professes His Existence, I wonder why

    Jus Something I tht of today..write in guys..I'd like to knw what you guys think!!
  11. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Ok!! I think its time we have dedicated forum for just Poem's, what do you think?
  12. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    thats what i meant you moron.....i was askin if you were smoking by yourself....you know you should share.....what the F#$^ do you mean by grandma.....
  13. aysh

    aysh -|h3 ori9in4| (ui!aris-|-

    was that a poem (the first one) or just a frustrated outburst ?
  14. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    @ menon... hmm... i don't really understand what you're trying to say... sounds like an driver getting irritated by animals blocking the road... but the last sentence beats me... care to explain?

    @ neo, great idea...

    @skaw, well, nobody got anywhere high on the ladder without beginning from the bottom...
  15. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    i think its a nice idea with so many poets around here :p:p:p
  16. Menon

    Menon New Member

    That was jus something that came to me man..wanted to make it sound all philosohical n all..guess it didn't work eh?
    Neva mind..yall, I'll come up with somethin else..
  17. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Final Chapter...

    Forgive me for what I knew not was wrong
    Blame me not for my ignorance
    You shared the hope I did have once
    But now it seems I was mistaken all along.
    And yet it seems you and I were there
    Winning, gaining and leading the way
    Little did I know, you and I never were...
    Two beings separated, as night and day.

    You followed me though I wished not to lead
    You followed me though I wished so to leave

    Blame me not, for I did not forget
    Blame me not, for it aint too late

    I am but a tool of a greater design
    I am but a mortal, I will yet die...

    And in haste we forgot what we knew from birth
    In haste we forgot the truth of ash and dust

    Together with thee, I swear my hardest I'll try
    Yet together with thee, I am but alive...

    (23rd November 2004)
  18. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    wow, that would be great but don't you think zoommie deserves a break, he's done so much in the last few days........i mean smilies, bangali tabs forum, igt photo album, poor guy.......
  19. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Zoom, is a superman!
  20. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    damn, i was so confused, i was writeing a reply in the chit chat forum and all of a sudden i was in a new forum, what the heck was that, and yea i know he's superman.....you're helping him out thought right....hehe, such a good boss
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