poems and poetic thoughts....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sonali, Sep 15, 2004.

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  1. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    hey reems , nice one ,... but ICQ ,... Q ...

    ;) :)
  2. Reem

    Reem Banned

    bobby... it is not my poem... and No i dont have ICQ acct if that was the question.. hahhaha
  3. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Spread tat SMILE...

    Hi everyone...

    Well my exams got over 2 days ago... and some thoughts in my mind, during exams were transferred on paper....

    "The fun, the thrill...
    The joy, the happiness...
    The mistakes, the corrections...
    The beautiful mornings, the never ending nights...
    The love of mom, the discipline of dad...
    These were the pleasureful days of our childhood...

    But as we grow, the INNOCENCE is lost...
    Giving importance to small issues...
    Analysing everything for GOOD or BAD...
    Loosing the basic essence of life...

    So Live & let Live...
    Be happy & spread happiness...
    Spread tat SMILE..."

  4. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    yep, deffinately agree with lavu on this...... really nice zoom.
  5. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Forever Gone

    In a joyful moment it seemed luck fell good upon me
    For in her eyes I saw the spark I wished to see
    But then pride, newlyfound devoured me, I dared to love
    And in her eyes, I saw the signs that said she does

    A butterfly caught in the thorns of a pretty flower
    I was called, and yet it wasn't she who called
    And the end but a moment too close
    I spoke the words, and waited...
    Time stood still till the forbidden woes
    Came upon me like the fall of a crumbling tower

    Copyright, me October 20, 2004
  6. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    and then what happened??? :mad:
  7. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    happened to whom?
  8. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    what happens after the tower falls on you :confused:

    just joking :)
  9. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    haha... i'll continue later maybe.
  10. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    something i came up with.......


    The passing nights, the running days,
    I feel them go, through a throng of years.
    I want to stand still, in time and space,
    With my memories of smiles or tears.

    Through the labyrinths of time, I walk
    Cherishing old memoirs, I treasure
    Seemingly quiet with my heart they talk,
    Like old haunting ghosts my faith they reassure.

    Now in my life’s main, many things await me
    But old one’s cling on they are hard to let go,
    With an open heart, my eyes cautiously see,
    The waters of future, through which I row.

    As I move on, familiar voices I here,
    They come form behind the way they do,
    Reminds me of the way angles appear
    No less ‘they’ are, to me they are true

    Torn apart by tides of time, we had to move on,
    But waters that break are the waters that make,
    Someday we return, after having gone,
    To the ripples we broke in our wake…

    © Copyright Saurabh Rahurkar
  11. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    quite good... keep it up... looking forward to more stuff by you
  12. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    me too....am looking forward to more frm me :D
  13. tejas

    tejas ..........

    That was very good Saurabh. Keep it up. Want to read more of your stuff.
  14. gautam_njoy

    gautam_njoy New Member

    nice one saurabh.. this is amazing thread...
    KKep it up
  15. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Feel the LOVE...

    Scribbled this down... last nite...

    Its simple, its complex...
    Its easy, its hard...
    Its delicate, its rigid...
    Its happiness, its sorrow...
    Its understandings, its misunderstandings...
    Its life, its soul...
    Its called LOVE, pure as water & deep as Amazon...
    Its a feeling left alone in hearts, inexpressible on paper...
    Without it neither can we live nor can we die...
    So let the LOVE spread & fill your lives...

  16. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Its a nice poetic thought, zoom...

    Here's another one by me...

    I Ask

    Why do the leaves fall if only to grow once again
    Why the sun shines when my heart desires it to rain
    Why the ash dust takes shape to become life
    If return to dust again it will, taking great pains

    Why dream for peace, when the day brings war
    Why cry for help, when no hero ever there was
    Why aim for greatness and glory
    When Happiness'll never be for me
    'N why love and be loved in return
    When the end is never a bit too far
  17. Reem

    Reem Banned

    It is NOT true love it is called Stupidity.. hahaha why he didn’t search for sea or water pool.. or simply make her jump and then he can jump after her.. being injured is better than death..

    As for me I will not love a guy who doesn’t know what to do.. or who cant control his motorcycle.. I won’t accept that he sacrifices for me and leave me…

    Either we stay alive together or die together.. this is true love.. :beer:
  18. Menon

    Menon New Member

    Great Work Guys...
    Some wonderful stuff esgal..all you guys, reem..it's wonderful..and since the mood is soo depressing, here's something I wrote when I was moving jobs..


    THoughts in time
    NO action
    waitin for good things to happen
    Coincidences and Associations
    Smiles to oneself
    Deep Sighs
    Manifestations of times gone
    never to returtn
    An intelligent mind
    wasting away
    of sweet smelling girls
    dark,dingy rooms
    omnipresent haze of dreams and recollection
    an alternate state of being
    snatched away
    mornings smelling like whisky and
    evenings like rain on earth
    ostracised from oneself
    death on the inside
    never ending soul searchin
    depending on fate
    he who seeks his destiny
    No awe, no idolatry
    just bafflement
    Of remote thoughts
    memories of times gone by
    and days that fly
    In a cocoon on contemplation
    rife with anaction
    unrest and volumes of procrastination
    soon to be looked upon
    Fondly and otherwise...
  19. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    i must say, that is sooooooo sweet :snifs:
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