poems and poetic thoughts....

@ sonali , smart gurl :gudjob:

@ reem , lolz , i'd say its true ... no matter who the girl is , i guess you should respect her , unless shes a "you know what" ...

 

@ reem , nice one

@ gautam - juss chill , it was an observation and i said nice one ,... cool ...

@ skaw - :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

@ tejas , chill ,...

 

Egotist Man

Egotist is someone
Who respects no one

Tries to be nice
Can’t accept advice

Thinks he is complete
No one can compete

By stupid girls, is surrounded
At his door are crowded

Talks about hearts
R broken by his arts

Can’t tolerate ignorance
Coz of his arrogance

A slap across the face
The end he must face

By…. Me

 

@ reem , :two thumbs up: nice ...

 

nice job reem....

 

Sadness - A Ship (Rough Copy)

The muted glare of the moon sluggishly passed through the clouds and shone on the lone dull metallic hull of the ship. The Vessel shambled its foul rusty propeller and gave a final thrust to the shore. It was time. Time to continue her extensive excursion that was written in her fate. It was a time without an end. Beneath the hull, wavered the lifelong waters of the deep that surpassed the edge of the everlasting ocean. The ship miserably quivered as the waves shattered against the hull, leaving her numb. Her whole body sank downwards from her own weight. The waves seemed so exultant and electrified yet they carried her destiny. Solemnly drifting on the immense oceanic region, the vessel moaned a sympathetic sigh. “Ah! What a pity!” The world appeared so calm and peaceful as she hurdled her way to the shore. She came to a halt. The vessel remained motionless for quiet a while. Her old foul tarnished engine inhaled and exhaled noisily, attempting to free the weight piled up in her bosom. The entire body was drained out and exhausted from a long period of drifting and travelling around the ocean, which seemed to have no mercy for her. Prevailing with mighty force, the wind collided with the waves. The water splashed around the base, scraping the crumbled bit of the rusty aluminium base away. The horizon appeared as an endless rim for it circled the whole ocean. It carried a great deal of history. Suddenly the silence broke as the horn blared constantly. Her hopeless journey was about to begin. The propeller weakly swivelled, slowly forcing the vessel to scuffle its body to prepare for another long quest. Her fate depended on the marks carried by the waves of the North. The horn slowly gave a final cry as the ocean welcomed her journey to the Neverland.

 

@ skaw - :shock::shock::shock::shock::shock:

 

@ bob , what ?? don't scare me like that ...

what are those poems called that don't rhyme ?? i know there is a name to them i just can't think of it .. since a week ..

 

skaw you're the type of person who talks to his guitar, aren't you? don't feel bad for the ship, it's only metal......jokes aside, it was a very well written pice of work, good job :thumbsup:

 

Skaw, quite good stuff there... very heavy. Keep it up.

 

ok , guess what , for the second one i got ...

16.5 / 20

now i wonder if i should cry or not ... :think:

 

hi all..

why not posting poems here.. we want to see new posts here time to time.. it shouldnt be urs.. but please do write the writer name at the end or just write "Anonymous"

 

well skaw .. i did'nt understand that either. .. i'm sorry. ... maybe this thread is a bit too high above the head for me. .

 

Thinking of You

The moment I first met you..
The way you talk and smile..
It all seems like a dream.. But how can I forget you..
Days do not pass without thinking of you..
The way you look and talk..
The way you run and walk..
I watch you at a distance talking to a girl..
My heart bleeds with sorrow at this manner of yours..
I am infatuated with you.. how can I convince you of my love..
Call it you may jealousy.. but I want you as mine..
The day you left.. I cried..
But memories are left.. which are spent in thinking of you..

Anonymous

 

oh my god....reem you just said the story of my life.....:snifs: it so nice....nice post...

 

@ reem , nice stuff miss... didn't read a good poem since a long time... :all thumbs up: to the author

 

hey buddy i tried to search that thhread - culd'nt found it. pls post the link if you know that.

This is an amazing thread - i have read all the grrrreat stuff you guys have posted, :nw: essi , :nw: sonali, :nw: zoom, :nw: skaw, :nw: reem, i must say you all are superb (out of the world). Hatssoff!! to all of you who had posted their thought's / poem here.

 

Yeah man. Heres the link. Cool stuff from essi in there. Chech it out.
https://indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?t=249&highlight=written+songs

 

What You Mean To Me

I never came here looking for a single soul.
But now that I found you I want you to know

I had forgotten how to smile, how to laugh, how to be me
I had forgotten the sweet pleasure of a heart filled with glee.

I was intoxicated with life... work and family
Never stopping for fun... it just wasn't there you see.

Since I have found you... it's been a complete turn around
I smile and laugh again... not much gets me down.

I get excited when I see you on ICQ
Wondering what it is today we will do...

Chatting, laughing and the games we play
You make my every day.

It seems so silly on just a machine
How someone can reach you... become your everything.

by Baby Bad
cyber friends poems

 

@ gud stuff reem ..

@ alex .. don't bow infront of me ... it me