poems and poetic thoughts....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sonali, Sep 15, 2004.

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  1. skaw

    skaw snooze

    @ sonali , smart gurl :gudjob:

    @ reem , lolz , i'd say its true ... no matter who the girl is , i guess you should respect her , unless shes a "you know what" ...
  2. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    @ reem , nice one :)

    @ gautam - juss chill , it was an observation and i said nice one ,... cool ...

    @ skaw - :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

    @ tejas , chill ,... :)
  3. Reem

    Reem Banned

    Egotist Man

    Egotist is someone
    Who respects no one

    Tries to be nice
    Can’t accept advice

    Thinks he is complete
    No one can compete

    By stupid girls, is surrounded
    At his door are crowded

    Talks about hearts
    R broken by his arts

    Can’t tolerate ignorance
    Coz of his arrogance

    A slap across the face
    The end he must face

    By…. Me
  4. skaw

    skaw snooze

    @ reem , :two thumbs up: nice ...
  5. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    nice job reem....
  6. skaw

    skaw snooze

    Sadness - A Ship (Rough Copy)

    The muted glare of the moon sluggishly passed through the clouds and shone on the lone dull metallic hull of the ship. The Vessel shambled its foul rusty propeller and gave a final thrust to the shore. It was time. Time to continue her extensive excursion that was written in her fate. It was a time without an end. Beneath the hull, wavered the lifelong waters of the deep that surpassed the edge of the everlasting ocean. The ship miserably quivered as the waves shattered against the hull, leaving her numb. Her whole body sank downwards from her own weight. The waves seemed so exultant and electrified yet they carried her destiny. Solemnly drifting on the immense oceanic region, the vessel moaned a sympathetic sigh. “Ah! What a pity!” The world appeared so calm and peaceful as she hurdled her way to the shore. She came to a halt. The vessel remained motionless for quiet a while. Her old foul tarnished engine inhaled and exhaled noisily, attempting to free the weight piled up in her bosom. The entire body was drained out and exhausted from a long period of drifting and travelling around the ocean, which seemed to have no mercy for her. Prevailing with mighty force, the wind collided with the waves. The water splashed around the base, scraping the crumbled bit of the rusty aluminium base away. The horizon appeared as an endless rim for it circled the whole ocean. It carried a great deal of history. Suddenly the silence broke as the horn blared constantly. Her hopeless journey was about to begin. The propeller weakly swivelled, slowly forcing the vessel to scuffle its body to prepare for another long quest. Her fate depended on the marks carried by the waves of the North. The horn slowly gave a final cry as the ocean welcomed her journey to the Neverland.
  7. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    @ skaw - :shock::shock::shock::shock::shock:
  8. skaw

    skaw snooze

    @ bob , what ?? don't scare me like that ...

    what are those poems called that don't rhyme ?? i know there is a name to them i just can't think of it .. since a week ..
  9. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    skaw you're the type of person who talks to his guitar, aren't you? don't feel bad for the ship, it's only metal......jokes aside, it was a very well written pice of work, good job :thumbsup:
  10. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Skaw, quite good stuff there... very heavy. Keep it up.
  11. skaw

    skaw snooze

    ok , guess what , for the second one i got ...

    16.5 / 20

    now i wonder if i should cry or not ... :think:
  12. Reem

    Reem Banned

    hi all..

    why not posting poems here.. we want to see new posts here time to time.. it shouldnt be urs.. but please do write the writer name at the end or just write "Anonymous"
  13. abhay_saxena

    abhay_saxena Lord of the strings

    well skaw .. i did'nt understand that either. .. i'm sorry. ... maybe this thread is a bit too high above the head for me. .
  14. Reem

    Reem Banned

    Thinking of You

    The moment I first met you..
    The way you talk and smile..
    It all seems like a dream.. But how can I forget you..
    Days do not pass without thinking of you..
    The way you look and talk..
    The way you run and walk..
    I watch you at a distance talking to a girl..
    My heart bleeds with sorrow at this manner of yours..
    I am infatuated with you.. how can I convince you of my love..
    Call it you may jealousy.. but I want you as mine..
    The day you left.. I cried..
    But memories are left.. which are spent in thinking of you..

  15. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    oh my god....reem you just said the story of my life.....:snifs: it so nice....nice post...
  16. skaw

    skaw snooze

    @ reem , nice stuff miss... didn't read a good poem since a long time... :all thumbs up: to the author
  17. alex

    alex New Member

    hey buddy i tried to search that thhread - culd'nt found it. pls post the link if you know that.

    This is an amazing thread - i have read all the grrrreat stuff you guys have posted, :nw: essi , :nw: sonali, :nw: zoom, :nw: skaw, :nw: reem, i must say you all are superb (out of the world). Hatssoff!! to all of you who had posted their thought's / poem here.
  18. tejas

    tejas ..........

  19. Reem

    Reem Banned

    What You Mean To Me

    I never came here looking for a single soul.
    But now that I found you I want you to know

    I had forgotten how to smile, how to laugh, how to be me
    I had forgotten the sweet pleasure of a heart filled with glee.

    I was intoxicated with life... work and family
    Never stopping for fun... it just wasn't there you see.

    Since I have found you... it's been a complete turn around
    I smile and laugh again... not much gets me down.

    I get excited when I see you on ICQ
    Wondering what it is today we will do...

    Chatting, laughing and the games we play
    You make my every day.

    It seems so silly on just a machine
    How someone can reach you... become your everything.

    by Baby Bad
    cyber friends poems
  20. skaw

    skaw snooze

    @ gud stuff reem ..

    @ alex .. don't bow infront of me ... it :eek: me
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