poems and poetic thoughts....

@ essi , all of them posted by you are good ,...

@ sonali , try ,... i am sure you will come up with something nice ,...

@ tejas - you have time now , so try ,... lol 2 days , gone today ,...

 

@ Bob - Er..What am i supposed try?

 

writing a poem , or u can write ur own song ,,,... wow , i think i can start a new thread for ur own song composition , what do u say ,...

with guys like essi and zoom , it will surely rock ,...

 

There was a thread like that before. And i did post a song there. Search the Lyrics and Music forum. You'll find it in like the third or fourth page.

 

hmm , cool - but first will have to write , i dun think so i have the patience to write a song or a poem , even if i do , i am sure i wud not be acceptable by many ,... i juss love raw lyrics ,...

 

hmm... you should have better opinion of uis than that

 

cool , in that case will try and write something ,...

 

Remember one thing bob. It has to come out from the heart. Otherwise its not worth writing.

 

Her

As I await besides this forking road
Trapped in a turmoil of bitter hope

I wish I could but see her face
Against the wind, one last trace

I see the light, the air, and its end
I feel the pain, the agonizing strain
As I send to it, my forgotten refrain

When morning came, I made the call
Into summer's end, the dawn of fall
Memories and thoughts, both intertwined
As I saw in her eyes, the tears she was crying
Remembering of what in reality once was
Wondering of the words I'd seen on stars
Following me on the salty path
I came upon her, and saw at last
Withering of nature's beauty, from rose to sand
And I shall await her ever in this stranger's land

For I see the light, the air, and its end
I hear its taunt, its piercing claim.

 

Copyright, me, September 20, 2004

 

hey , now ur making me more scared ,.... lol ... i am mean from the heart , i left it back in india , .... i am heartless sweetheart of africa ,... lol

but i will try ,....

 

now thats a nice one essi ,...

 

Very nice, but one question, u said "I wish I could but see her face". That gives the meaning that I wish i could avoid looking at her. I think there is no need for that "But" there. Overall, its very nice What or who is the inspiration behind this.

 

even i wud like to know who inspired you ?

 

wow, that one was amazing essi........

 

wooow , essi and zoom are great poets , :rockon:

 

hey that love one was pretty cool...

 

I'm not a perfect person
There's many things I wish I didn't do
But I continue learning
I never meant to do those things to you
And so I have to say before I go
That I just want you to know

I've found a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
And the reason is you

I'm sorry that I hurt you
It's something I must live with everyday
And all the pain I put you through
I wish that I could take it all away
And be the one who catches all your tears
That's why I need you to hear

I've found a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
And the reason is you
And the reason is you
And the reason is you
And the reason is you

I'm not a perfect person
I never meant to do those things to you
And so I have to say before I go
That I just want you to know

I've found a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A rea...

 

hey gautam , u didnt complete it :think:

but whatever posted is really cool , u ve done that ur self :shock: :shock:

 

Bob, thats not his original, you do know that right. Thats Hoobastank's "The reason".