poems and poetic thoughts....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sonali, Sep 15, 2004.

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  1. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    Here's another one from me....i know it's no "Eternal Summer" but i'm just a rookie.....gimmie a break.....

    Lost Love
    You were the one she dreamed of always.
    The one that offered her only happiness.
    Your face is burned into her memories.
    A smile that lives beyond a lifetime.
    Every time you spoke a word,
    Her heart skipped a beat.
    Every time you gave a glance,
    She seemed to forget just how to breathe.
    But the foolish girl couldn’t tell you that.
    Her heart was in chains when you were near,
    It couldn’t break the shackles that kept it restrained,
    It couldn’t penetrate her uncertain fears.
    But when she understood what might have been,
    Your smile was all that remained. ​
  2. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Just made this up...

    have you ever seen a rainbow form on a cloudy sky
    have you ever seen a crow fall from above as it flies
    have you ever feared the sound of rain when it is still hot
    did you ever know the truth, though you said you did not?

    Through the wisdom of the years,
    Face the furnace of your fears
    Let it die
    Let it die

    have you ever seen a child go on a merry go round
    have you ever seen one climb a tree and fallen down
    have you ever stayed awake for the tooth fairy to appear
    did you let go, though you said you would always be there

    With the exuberance of a youth long gone
    Cry again the joy tears, the merry song
    Let it flow
    Let it flow

    Once more,
    One last time
    Before you go...
  3. Gn'rlies

    Gn'rlies New Member

    hey ... some relly impressive stuff .... here's my contribution .... a little silly ... i wrote it in class 9 ..... but it still means a lot to me ....

    Everyone has a dream to build on,
    everyone has a reason to live on
    when hard times come around,
    what makes you go on,
    is the hope to turn right ,
    all that went wrong .
    when you're low in your spirits,
    and the pain has lost all it's limits
    you feel like giving up trying
    and all you think of is dying
    but you still go on
    and you get this strength to go on,
    beacuse there is always hope
    to turn right all that went wrong
    and so you travel on and on
    even when all is lost and gone,
    and continue your journey even if the end is nowhere in sight
    because there is still hope deep inside
    that everything that ever went wrong
    will someday.....turn right.

    Keep the faith people ...
    gn'r ....
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    @essi - that was awsome.
  5. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Hmm, it does seem very odd. Good observation sonali. If jay is really coming back that is.
  6. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    @ sonali / tejas , ha ha , whereever i may roam ,,,..... ( said for jay )

    @ essi , cool , really awesome dude , ...

    @ sonali , thats a very cool thing u posted abt lost love ,.... " Your smile was all that remained. " a perfect end :)
  7. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    One of my early works of which I am proud if only because it can be interpretated in many different ways...

    Split From Within

    I am two, can't you see
    How I sleep, how I wake
    Good and Bad? lost in me
    In between but not within
    Tormented joyful bliss
    Together I feel, deep in me

    I am me, Who is he?
    Angel? Demon? I am both
    Still I see, blinded view
    Still I hear, mute imbue
    Life I want, death I need
    Proudly stood, craven lewd

    Who am I? I don't know
    Who are you? Do you know?
  8. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    wooooooooooo essiiiiiiiiiii , this one will be best death metal way :rockon: :rock:
  9. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Hey essi, that great. I tried to write one about the same topic once but it never came of well. You nailed it. Great job.
  10. cool_is_rule

    cool_is_rule Lead Guitarist

    One here


    A friend is someone we turn to
    when our spirits need a lift.
    A friend is someone we treasure
    for our friendship is a gift.
    A friend is someone who fills our lives
    with beauty, joy, and grace.
    And makes the whole world we live in
    a better and happier place.

    cOoL iS :rule:
  11. cool_is_rule

    cool_is_rule Lead Guitarist

    One more

    What You Are To Me

    I am a rose, you are my thorns,
    clutching to me, protecting me.
    I am the sun, you are my rays,
    helping me to shine and to be all that I can.
    I am a lake, you are my water,
    filling me with ideas, dreams, and hopes for the future.
    I am a tree, you are my leaves,
    sharing who and what I am
    and becoming an important part of my life.
    I am a heart, you are my beat,
    beating rhythmically to my happiness,
    my fear, my sadness, my excitement.
    I am me and you are with me,
    to share all that I am,
    to share life, love, and happiness.


    cOoL iS :rule:
  12. cool_is_rule

    cool_is_rule Lead Guitarist


    As I stand here today with the world as my witness,
    I pledge to you my undying and everlasting love.
    I will stand beside you as your partner,
    I will stand before you as your protector,
    And I will stand behind you as your solace.
    Please spend and end your life with me.

    cOoL iS :rule:
  13. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    post some of your own compostion ,...
  14. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    hey great job guys......very nice poems.....keep em comming....
  15. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    wud like to hear some more from zoom and essi , the rocking dudes ,...
  16. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    I don't know... i wouldn't call those two I posted very good quality stuff...

    Here's one of my fav... I dn't know who wrote this... i found it somewhere and saved it and its been with me almost forever now...


    ONE asked of regret,
    And I made reply:
    To have held the bird,
    And let it fly;
    To have seen the star
    For a moment nigh,
    And lost it
    Through a slothful eye;
    To have plucked the flower
    And cast it by;
    To have one only hope—
    To die.
  17. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Rummaging through my old collections... this is also a very old poem.

    Finger in the sky
    Is that a sign
    Of times passing by?
    Or is it just time
    To set things aright
    To say good night
    To the dying light
  18. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Great stuff essi. And ur wrong, the ones u posted before were also very good.
  19. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    yea nice job essi....i can't seem to write stuff unless they sound like actual short sories or simething.....i've been trying to do stuff like yours but they aren't turning out quite right.....i'll eventually get how to do it tho...
  20. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    @ sonali... keep on trying... rome wasn't built in a day.

    @ tejas... well... i wont argue about it, but I have had some expert opinion (a creative writing expert in singapore) on most of my writings so I know which is good and which are not... i'll post some of my better ones later...
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