poems and poetic thoughts....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sonali, Sep 15, 2004.

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  1. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    the title explains it all.....poems and poetic thoughts in this thread...

    here's mine....hope you like it...

    Strange Behavior:voices in my head...


    let me just ask you.....what the F#%@ is wrong with you???........whey
    the F#$# do you keep talking to yourself???.....who do you think you
    are huh???....Stephen King is a goddanmed genius and you don't even
    know how to spell genious so whats the big idea with being a complete
    moron when it comes to reality.....why the hell do you not act
    normal......why the F#$$%^& hell don't you know what it is to be
    normal.....you know you got serious problems my friend.....why in
    goddanmed hell am i calling you my friend??? i don't even like
    you....wait i am you so doesn't that mean you have to like me???? no
    goddanm it who gave you that idea you moron.....plz don't curse at me,
    i could easily kill you....no you can you idiot....you're too scared
    to do that...i dare you to try it.....i dare you to tempt me
    further....shut the F#$% up will you....fine you win....haha i always

    yea you always win.....
  2. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    True love...

    Girl: Slow down. Im scared.
    Guy: No this is fun.
    Girl: No its not. Please, its too scary!
    Guy: Then tell me u Love me.
    Girl:Ok, I Love u. Slow down!
    Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
    *Girl hugs him*
    Guy: Can u take my helmet off & put it on? Its buggin me.

    In the paper the next day:
    A motorcycle had crashed into a building because of break failure.
    2 ppl were on it but only 1 survived. The truth
    was that halfway down the road, the guy realized
    that his breaks broke, but he didn't want 2 let
    the girl know. Instead, he had her say she Loved
    him & felt her hug 1 last time, then had her wear
    his helmet so that she would live even though it
    meant that he would die.

    i got this some whare else so i can't take the cradit for it.....but it's so sweet that i decided to post it anyway....
  3. skaw

    skaw snooze

    Wht The ..

    ok i was thinking that i wuld jus read a lil pass sumtime n go but this thing is dusturbing ... and give a heads up nex time ... poetry is suppose to be soft n stuff as far as i noe .. but this is like 'F..k' no offense sonali but whts up ?? this thing made me go cucu.. this thread mite b offensive to a lot of ppl (not to me thou, all this is under weirdness so doesnt hurts me :p) ... and plus the thread title sugury n the content is bitter ... try changin tht title to 'b.tchy poems' mite give a lil heads up .. anyways expect to c more loving n caring poems and wht not .. but dont make posts like the first 1 .. its scary :shock: ... anywayz this thread mite b really kool .. i ll post more stuff later but for beginners:

    "roses are red,
    violent are blue,
    i'm scared that,
    u're too sweet to be true"

    created by 'monsiuer skaw' (hold the applause plz :p:p:p:p)
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Yeah, when i read the title i expected something else. I didn't understand how either of them are poetic. But okay, the second one was kinda 'sweet' but the first, i don't get it. Anyway, heres my contribution -

    Hurt comes from within.
    Relief comes from those around.

    I stongly believe the above lines.
  5. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    hey sonali , that sounded like a hip hop !!! cool ,...
  6. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    thanks for the complement bobby........you know…sometimes I feel like you’re the only one who appreciates me :(

    @ the two disturbers of peace - i was thought that anything that shows personal feelings is considered poetic.....that first one was a bit strange i know but i was only talking to myself....i wouldn't dream of talking that way to another human being.....or any type of being for that matter......guys i'm really sorry if i offended anyone.....here's a poem i wrote for school last year....i couldn't really put the feelings i wanted to in it because we were given certain guidelines as to how the poem should look....so in effort to make certain words rhyme i pretty much slaughtered the whole idea of the poem....but here it is anyway since you guys want sugary stuff…..

    Love and Let Live

    Your beauty floods my days
    Like the sun floods the earth with brilliant lights.
    Your kindness and effortless grace
    Takes my dreams to amazing heights.

    Your golden skin and chocolate hair
    Makes the stars stare in bewilderment.
    Your clever eyes and careless cheer
    Makes the moon burn with resentment.

    Your smile makes flowers bloom
    Your crying makes them wilt and wither.
    Your eyes close bringing grief and gloom
    Your eyes open and they both disappear.

    I need you like all life needs air
    But you will never know this… nor will you ever care.
  7. sonnet

    sonnet New Member

    Around the corner I have a friend,
    In this great city that has no end;
    Yet days go by, and weeks rush on,
    And before I know it a year is gone,
    And I never see my old friend's face,
    For life is a swift and terrible race.

    He knows I like him just as well
    As in the days when I rang his bell
    And he rang mine. We were younger then,

    And now we are busy, tired men:
    Tired with playing a foolish game,
    Tired with trying to make a name.
    "Tomorrow," I say, "I will call on Jim,
    Just to show I am thinking of him."

    But tomorrow comes - and tomorrow goes,
    And the distance between us grows and grows.
    Around the corner! - yet miles away . .

    "Here's the telegram, Sir. . .
    'Jim died today'."

    And that's what we get, and deserve in the end:
    Around the corner, a vanished friend.

    - by Charles Hanson Towne
  8. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    :'( come on man we said sugary not salty tears......man why did you have to do that....

    hey i didn't even see my title before....i can't believe neo changed it to annoying...when i changed his to that amazing compliment....in a way its a great honor to get in the lord's nurves but i must admit it's also kinda hurtful....the lord doesn't care abt my emotions guys...i'll come back with a poem abt that......and why the hell isn't there any crying smilies on this forum....i can't fully show my feelings with :'(.......
  9. skaw

    skaw snooze

    @ sonali , ms annoyin suits u ... and finally u post up sum sugury stuff .. and salty is also kool ...

    tht was a nice poem .. i ll hve to type my stuff up from paper to comp n then post it .. i ll do it ltr.. too lazy ... well hope to c more kool stuff
  10. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Sonali, the first poem ( should i call it a poem ?? ... i wonder) was weird, but lemme tell ya , I liked it...
  11. sonnet

    sonnet New Member

    Sonali...i'm not sure who you are talking to....but assuming its me......hmmm...i guess i am sorry to make you emotional.......haha

    Anyways...here's a happy one :)

    I shot an arrow into the air,
    It fell to earth, I knew not where;
    For, so swiftly it flew, the sight
    Could not follow it in its flight.

    I breathed a song into the air,
    It fell to earth, I knew not where;
    For who has sight so keen and strong,
    That it can follow the flight of song?

    Long, long afterward, in an oak
    I found the arrow, still unbroke;
    And the song, from beginning to end,
    I found again in the heart of a friend.

    -- by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
  12. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    nice stuffs sonali and sonnet , keep rockin :rockon:

    i am sure we will hear something from zoom very soon ,....
  13. NovemberRain

    NovemberRain New Member

    You bury your treasure
    Where it can’t be found
    But your love is like a secret
    That’s been passed around
    There is a silence that comes to a house
    Where no one can sleep
    I guess it’s the price of love
    I know it’s not cheap

    -U2, Ultraviolet
  14. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    For my Love...

    Hello Everybody,
    Well the lines below were meant for my first Love... Still the first in my heart... Each line has a great importance for me as it speaks wat i was passing through...
    So Enjoy....

    "Sleeping on the bed,
    Thinking about you....
    The darkness of the Night,
    is so new to me....

    Thoughts of loosing you,
    passing in my mind....
    This fear itself,
    sends shiver down my spine!

    Thinking of the moments, I spent with you,
    Leaves me with joy; unimaginable!
    Waiting for the moment to say,
    "I LOVE YOU" .....
    Praying to the God to get it through...

    Thinking that, its not too late,
    I always wish you, success in life...

    I Miss you a Lot...
    Luv U!!"

    Well, these lines failed to move her....
    So Life is always Unpredictable...

    So always, Have Fun! :rockon:

  15. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Wow, thats great zoom.
  16. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    wow , thats really really great !!!!!! : zoom , you rule dude :rockon:
  17. ananth222

    ananth222 Beginner

    A severed head floated over a lake, bobbing up and down in the wavelets.
    Would I have felt better if the cadaver was whole?

  18. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    you really tryin to scatter some heads here anant :confused:
  19. skaw

    skaw snooze

    nice stuff ppz , i aint posting nothin of mine up anymore ... me outz .. no more igt
  20. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    hey....guys don't you think its a bit of a coincidence that jay left and skaw came......and when jay comes back all of a sudden....skaw decides to leave.....there is something very peculiar abt this situation......:think:
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