poem...titled as main hi kyun

hi to all

posting my new poetry..titled as main hi kyun

saaye bhi ulajh se gaye hai.
tasveer doond mein kho se gaye hai
kyon hota hai mere hi saath
soch kar aankhen nam ho gaye hai

zindagi har mod pe tham kyon gayi
khamoshiyan bhi mujhe kuch kehti rahi
dard hi kismat mein likha tha
to pholon ki khusboo kyon aati rahi.

raat bhi hairaan ho ab poochne lage
zindagi jung hi sahi par kab tak youn hi sahte rahen
ek umra sahi,kab talak hum tadapenge
ab to hum bhi aye khuda, khud se hum kahene lage

once again..waiting for your responses

rohit

 

pretty awesome lyrics dude .. u got talent !

 

Thats really a nice piece of writing!

 

hey nice work

nut dard hi kisamt mein lkhi thi is wrong..............DARD is not striling but pulling.....its supposed to be dard hi kismat main likha tha

 

thanks for your kind concern and nice suggestions...i followed as per your advice and edited it


rohit

 

Nice poem Dude..

 

Yet another goooooood work from u Rohit....keep going

 

Nice Poem......